My great love

My great love

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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True love is rare. Hold on tight. Doesn't always last forever.

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My great love
A Poem by Coyote Poetry


Pain of love lost must disappear into the wind.



                    My great love

Do we support to love but once?

Where have my ancient lover's gone?

Chain of passion and spiritual journeys leave
me with kind faces in dreams.

Everlasting smiles so rare they scar my heart and mind.

Are we love victims and the heart must die?

If the bleeding is unable to stop.

I believe we need closure to allow the open wound
to fade to a scar.

I remember trembling and soft hands opening the doors
taking the chill of the cold night away.

Cold Winter and rough weather allow the comfort of
two people to find peace for a time.

I remember the comfort of long nights.
Sweet joy of love dances in early morning.
The smell of skin and twisted hair against me.

My wrath took away the sweet memories and opening
of precious love and emotion.

Now sweet love bade me welcome.
My soul cannot see the beauty that dwells in my
sweet lover's eyes.

I sit upon the sand near the Atlantic ocean.
The sea winds is blowing from east to west.

I pray to the sea to allow my spirit to be able
to run free and be clean again.

The night revealed.
Beautiful auburn hair woman come to me.
Whisper we must live to love.

We must dance with the moon and stars.
Allow the sun to open our heart to a new day and beginning.

We will have many great lovers.
Our life is long and we shall be tested.


                           Coyote


© 2010 Coyote Poetry




© 2013 Coyote Poetry



Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Old poetry. I hope you enjoy.

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"I pray to the sea to allow my spirit to be able
to run free and be clean again.

The night revealed.
Beautiful auburn hair woman come to me.
Whisper we must live to love."

Wow. A very touching and emotive write. You comfort and tremble your readers in a good way. Thank you for sharing...:)..............

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Sami for reading and the positive comment. Love should be our best days.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

All true. You are welcome...:)......



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Cold Winter and rough weather allow the comfort of
two people to find peace for a time.

I remember the comfort of long nights.
Sweet joy of love dances in early morning.
The smell of skin and twisted hair against me.

Glorious.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Pryde. I appreciate the comment. One of my favorite poems.
Great narrative, as always. I enjoyed the images and the details you put into it. Alas, love can be such a b***h sometimes.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I agree and thank you for reading.
I did Coyote - I did enjoy this - thank you.
I could almost taste the salted breeze off the Atlantic ocean - truly wonderful!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Than you Anto. I appreciate the comment.
Emotional and sincere. Despite only having had one great love in my life, I understand the heartbreak of losing her. I love the hopefulness of the second half.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Old poetry. We must test life and find our place. Thank you for reading and the comment.
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A moonsoon of feelings with each line. Passionate!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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2 Years Ago

Yet, those times make the waiting worth the while :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Took me 36 years to find poor wife. Can't happen.
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2 Years Ago

Ohhh... I see
The beginning is somewhat a sad one; it depicts a theme of lost love.... Are we love victims and the heart must die? The rhetoric question here creates a pause to think! Nice job my friend...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you. Love will test us. Strong people keep hoping and trying.
Bonaventure Onuabuchi

2 Years Ago

So wise a saying- strong people keep hoping and trying... I love that.
Loved it. You have painted a picture with your words.
" Everlasting smiles so rare they scar my heart and mind.
Are we love victims and the heart must die?" - Beautiful.

Good job. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate the positive comment.
TheLostMind

2 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
This is so sublime and beautiful! Truly loved reading it :)

Best,
Ru.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear friend. I appreciate the comment.
Are we love victims and the heart must die?

If the bleeding is unable to stop.

I love how this is structured, after asking this question you go into the process of being able to make the bleeding stop. Loved it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you. Time and separation make all wounds less painful and the bleeding stop.
Love will find us again and again if we welcome it..
Your poem is beautifully soft and romantic.
Stunning!
:) Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Thank you Julie. I appreciate the comment.
MsJewel

2 Years Ago

My pleasure

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