I left a lady crying

Just some words.

                                    I left a lady crying

Lady true lay down alone.
Words of love left her upside down and alone.
She ransom her heart for a endearing love.'
She wanted to devour love with all her heart and soul.

He left a lady crying.
He left a lady dying.
He gave enough to inflamed her heart and took what he needed.
He left her weeping.

Lady true dwell in sorrow.
She bared her heart and she knew.
Love is chance.
Better to nourish the want of love than
never know the sweet kiss and kind embrace.

He asked her twice.
"Can you forgive me?
Lady true told him.
Men who steal and run.
He will learn.
He left a woman waiting.
He broke her heart and didn't care.
Karma is a fair judge my love.
You will miss me and I will forget you"

Men who dance in peril and live in the maze of lies and greed.
Will dream of Lady true and never know real peace again.

                    Coyote/John Castellenas

Author's Note

I learn a long time ago. One Lady true in a lifetime.

Reviews

[Jon Roggie]

Well said. The sadness from this kind of situation is too common Many seem to play with, or take advantage of another person's love, and simply throw it away. Often, the karma does come back to bite. Great write.
Jon
P.S. Please excuse any typos. I have an ad covering a good size portion of the review box!

[Coyote Poetry]

I get the same box. W.C need to pay the bills. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Jon Roggie]

I can work around the ads. They give a great place to mingle. As always, my pleasure.

[Kim]

Lovely writing. The last lines are very powerful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kim. I appreciate the comment. Poetry of the good and bad days of love are never forgotten.

[Reyvrex Questor Reyes]

Karma or no Karma, the conscience is there to chastise. But to leave a Lady Love is quite paradoxical. For how could that be love in the first place when it is expedient to leave her. But of course, there are reasons beyond the powers of men to do just what they do. That is only philosophical. Well-expressed poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. Most of us men learn too late. We held a diamond and let it go. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

very deep. and a powerful message here.


thank you for sharing. blessings. kindred poet

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do believe karma is a fair judge.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome. I love the poem but never have believed
in Karma that is from the Hindu beliefs
I believe we learn from any bad or good experience
and if they don't make that wrong they have done right
we Reap what sow it comes back to us we don't get away with it
I don't worry if someone has hurt taught me something if I have forgiven
them helps me even more. Blessings. Kindred poet

[Devesh]

This beautiful is elegant in it's simplicity and delivers it's rather powerful message quite effectively. Good writing! :))

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Devesh. I appreciate the comment.

[Devesh]

You're welcome. :)

[Honey-Bee]

Nice poem! A good lesson to learn to avoid karma. I think many have experience the pain of heart ache and the lesson that goes with it. Others continue breaking hearts. Thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

A wise person don't repeat mistakes. You are right. Many heartless people. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Rosalind Gale]

A simply told, sad, and familiar tale. The story of millions told with grace. Thank you Coyote, a pleasure as always.
-x-

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Rosalind for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Cryingkate]

A beautiful write Coyote, A Beautiful Glimpse into The tears of a Lady Left Crying and a Man left Dying

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with a true story. Most of us learn we leave something we should of held on to. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Cryingkate]

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