Last wish, first wish.

Words never spoken. Burn the wanting heart.

                                Last wish, first wish

Those wishing well wishes and the butterfly kisses of memories.
Leave me yearning for you dear lover.

You were my kind daydreams and wonderful night wish.
I remember the longing and the belonging of hands, lips and body.

I remembered I followed you and I learned.
You were waiting for me. I learned love find you.You do not find love.

You taught me. The splendor of love, long dance and sweet embrace.
Is a fire we shall not put to death.
Dear heart hold tight to wishing well wishes and the butterfly kisses.

                    John Castellenas/  Coyote

Author's Note

Finally a new poem. I hope you like.

Reviews

[Ted Kniffen]

Sometimes they come from nowhere, and some you have to sweat into shape. This looks like one delivered by your muse. Well written. Full of love and longing. The only thing, might be changing the line "I learn love find you" to 'I learned love finds you.' A small thing really.

Thanks John for the poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ted for the help and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Celie Rose]

"wishing well wishes and the butterfly kisses." I really liked this phrase. Love finds you. Nicely written

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Celie. I truly believe the old ancient wisdom. When I didn't care about love. Love did find me.

[Clara]

Very wistful and entirely romantic.
So pretty and so lovely as always, John!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Clara. I appreciate the comment.

[Insight "MH"]

I especially love this: "You were my kind daydreams and wonderful night wish".

The poem is so lovely, well done my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Insight. I appreciate the comment.

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

I love the straightforwardness of this poem...it's the type of thing I would find on a Valentine's Day card.

[Coyote Poetry]

Years ago. Someone told me. Write for Hallmark. Maybe I missed my calling. Thank you m friend for reading and the comment.

[Valentine]

I like the way you write like the American Indian part of you giving wisdom to your readers. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Some parts of us show up in our work. Can't stop it. Thank you my friend for reading and the comment.

[Rose Olstrom]

"I remembered I followed you and I learn" is not proper grammar

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right. I will repair and thank you. I appreciate the help.

[Ruth]

Such a heartfelt flow of holding the moment and feelings, a tender and emotional write that shows the tune played by the heart, gorgeous :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. I appreciate the comment.

[PeaceOfMind]

This is so expressive and impressive. The choice of words is beautiful. It shows how you long for someone. I am sure your "Lady love" will be flattered.

[Coyote Poetry]

She would be. Old memories are holding tightly. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Carissa Marie]

This was very romantic. I loved how I could feel the longing in your words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Carissa. Longing is a powerful word. Can express many emotions.