Lovely Liz

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Lovely Liz

On paper, pen and paper is spilled blood upon notions of things wanted and so damn far away.

We secretly abated love and you became wish to behold. I wanted you. To taste you  the Crown Royal whiskey. Slow and easy.

You called me honey, sweetie and dear. I called you my dark mistress, my haunting mademoiselle and endearing perfect beauty.

We pro-longed deep and long kisses. Knowing we treaded on quicksand where love could not grow.

My lovely Liz. I want us to run away and I want to know your secret places and learn glimpse of the storm you try to hold in. I see in your eyes. Tamed life starving for the midnight dance and I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

We danced once the deadly dance of free love and we exposed real skin and voice.

Sadly we accepted less dear Liz.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun. I pray you know laughter and you will dance the magic movement of where lovers. Know the wildness and freedom of hiding nothing and showing real skin and real face.

                                  John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

just words

Reviews

[Ardra]

I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun...

Loved these lines a lot. :)

You tell your tales as beautifully as the folklores ..we all gather to hear you sing the songs of your loves....so blessed they were ..you write so gently of them... beautiful as usual

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

So true only the truth will set one free- but it wasn’t meant to be- wonderful and deep🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Real truth is scary. Sometimes you learn. You have nothing left. Thank you dear Kelly for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Always my pleasure🌹

[Ana Papaya]

i really enjoy your words, always carrying me off to some dream world that either fills my heart or breaks it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Ana. I appreciate the kind words.

[Soundz]

Super emotional and enveloping.
I wish I could've been with you two on a night out at the bar or the club, because you guys would've sparked heart-fires in everyone.
Great work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

"On paper, pen and paper is spilled blood" as you sensuously and passionately describe the stolen kisses and stolen nights of splendor with your Liz...you light up the page with the emotion you both shared. Even if it was only for a moment, it was more than some have luck to find in a lifetime. Thank you for beautifully sharing your memories with us Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you dear friend for reading and the kind words. Rare times do we find true paradise.

[mae23]

Really beautifully expressed feelings here. Fun and interesting to read. Loved it!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Mae. I appreciate the kind words.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You delve again into a world full of contradictions. People who feel intensely and who are kind but simply are a storm inside that can cause devastation to themselves and others. Full of love and passion and brutal truth as always Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

Wonderfully poetic. So many brilliant and quotable lines for a piece this length. Great use of imagery, I enjoyed that. Thanks for sharing.
G

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading. I appreciate the comment.