Lovely Liz

Lovely Liz

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Lovely Liz

On paper, pen and paper is spilled blood upon notions of things wanted and so damn far away.

We secretly abated love and you became wish to behold. I wanted you. To taste you  the Crown Royal whiskey. Slow and easy.

You called me honey, sweetie and dear. I called you my dark mistress, my haunting mademoiselle and endearing perfect beauty.

We pro-longed deep and long kisses. Knowing we treaded on quicksand where love could not grow.

My lovely Liz. I want us to run away and I want to know your secret places and learn glimpse of the storm you try to hold in. I see in your eyes. Tamed life starving for the midnight dance and I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

We danced once the deadly dance of free love and we exposed real skin and voice.

Sadly we accepted less dear Liz.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun. I pray you know laughter and you will dance the magic movement of where lovers. Know the wildness and freedom of hiding nothing and showing real skin and real face.

                                  John Castellenas/Coyote


© 2017 Coyote Poetry



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I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun...

Loved these lines a lot. :)

You tell your tales as beautifully as the folklores ..we all gather to hear you sing the songs of your loves....so blessed they were ..you write so gently of them... beautiful as usual

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Coyote Poetry

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Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.



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i really enjoy your words, always carrying me off to some dream world that either fills my heart or breaks it.

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Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Thank you Ana. I appreciate the kind words.
Super emotional and enveloping.
I wish I could've been with you two on a night out at the bar or the club, because you guys would've sparked heart-fires in everyone.
Great work!

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Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Thank you for reading and the kind words. I do appreciate.
"On paper, pen and paper is spilled blood" as you sensuously and passionately describe the stolen kisses and stolen nights of splendor with your Liz...you light up the page with the emotion you both shared. Even if it was only for a moment, it was more than some have luck to find in a lifetime. Thank you for beautifully sharing your memories with us Coyote.

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Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Thank you dear friend for reading and the kind words. Rare times do we find true paradise.
Really beautifully expressed feelings here. Fun and interesting to read. Loved it!

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Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Thank you Mae. I appreciate the kind words.
I feel your longing for new places and someone to worship your face, your skin and your heart.

I pray you have escaped and find someone who loved you like the rising moon and the dawn sun...

Loved these lines a lot. :)

You tell your tales as beautifully as the folklores ..we all gather to hear you sing the songs of your loves....so blessed they were ..you write so gently of them... beautiful as usual

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
You delve again into a world full of contradictions. People who feel intensely and who are kind but simply are a storm inside that can cause devastation to themselves and others. Full of love and passion and brutal truth as always Coyote.

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Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

Thank you John. I appreciate the comment.
Wonderfully poetic. So many brilliant and quotable lines for a piece this length. Great use of imagery, I enjoyed that. Thanks for sharing.
G

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Coyote Poetry

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate the comment.

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