Baby, please stay.

Baby, please stay.

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Just words.

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                                      Baby, please stay.

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                             You and I

Once we were cigarettes, the gin and juice.
We had long nights and sweet kisses.
Once we talked till dawn.
We knew laughter and great need.
Today.
You and I.
Strangers in bed of ice.
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                      Some whiskey kisses
I remember you.
You never whispered love words.
Only demanding words
Break me, take me.
Make me feel wanted and needed.
Once I told you I loved you.
You gave me some whiskey kisses and you whispered.
Love is for the lucky and we are not the lucky.

                        John Castellenas/Coyote


© 2017 Coyote Poetry



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Coyote Poetry
Just words.

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Two amazing personality portraits . . . I've known each one & I've been each one. Great details to paint relatable scenes, so true-to-life. I was inspired by you again, getting back to remembering old loves, & posted a new one "Alexander Valley" -- thanks for the inspiration! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.



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Great, great deep words. The music and your poem ring so true for me. When you are the other women the hardest words to form is tell her.

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Coyote Poetry

1 Day Ago

I agree. Never the place to be dear Bonnie. Thank you for reading and the comment.
What sad love poems! Sad, butI like the writing. It sounds like the voice of experience, which makes the writing strong.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Days Ago

Thank you Debbie. I appreciate the comment.
it is a beautiful piece. your poems are too vivid. :)

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Days Ago

Thank you Irenic. I appreciate the comment,
irenic

1 Day Ago

you are welcome :)
Two amazing personality portraits . . . I've known each one & I've been each one. Great details to paint relatable scenes, so true-to-life. I was inspired by you again, getting back to remembering old loves, & posted a new one "Alexander Valley" -- thanks for the inspiration! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

2 Days Ago

Thank you dear friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
Guess if the shoe fits... how sad then that what you give is turned into mud and mire, John. Guess you could reverse the genders here.. but then perhaps, the emotions would be so very different.

Giving is not always a gift but a sentence given out by one's own jury.

You write tears so clearly, so emotionally.

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Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

Thank you my friend for reading. Once I was indebted to karma. You always get what you deserve.
emmajoy

4 Days Ago

Not always, John. When the wind alters direction, it can play games with fate, you know! Smiles, bl.. read more
"Love is for the lucky and we are not lucky." " strenger in the bed of ice." Thought provoking. Love the arrangement of your word and the use of metaphor. Well crafted.

Posted 5 Days Ago


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Coyote Poetry

4 Days Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TrKZUV_VzPQ Just follow the link. It's my review because there is no other way I could review this except to say I understand. Enjoy the song.

Posted 6 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

6 Days Ago

Thank you Fabian. I appreciate the comment.
Fabian G. Franklin

6 Days Ago

The song is These Dreams by Jim Croce.
Right to the point. Super choice of words. Very enjoyable. Thank you.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Thank you Augustus. I appreciate the comment.
i like the emotion of the poem. i can relate to it this is one of the things i like about poems.

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Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.
That last line is like a kick to the groin. My one thought was didn't any of that mean anything to you?

This is a sad one Coyote and well written.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

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