candle in the wind

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you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...

© 2018 wordman

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[jamie]

Reminds me of my first love. I still think about her everyday

[wordman]

yeah i guess we all walk down memory lane sometimes

[Dave Brown]

When you (er, I ) read your romantically inclined poetry, all done very soft and gently, I am surprised to find this coming from your boxing/contracting/hard knocks background.
Perhaps this is your way of stepping back from some of your rougher experiences.
Whatever, I don't really relate to romantic poetry for whatever reason, but I recognize and appreciate the gentle romantic work you have done as obviously, have the gazillions that have read and review your efforts
Quite impressive

[wordman]

thank you dave,we all have a soft side

[R.E. Ray]

Ah, the simplicity of love, in poetic form and the perfect image. Well captured and illustrated here, sir.

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Ahhh true love like this and the music and pic

[wordman]

well,im glad you liked it julie

[Kesch]

This is a sweet write and ever so lovely, so nicely written

[wordman]

thank you kescha,i appreciate the review

[Kesch]

not a problem sir....

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This lyrical love poem sounds like it might be put to music although I would alter the title so as not to provoke the ire of Sir Elton lol!
Welcome back Ron!!

[wordman]

he loves the glamour of it,,thanks john

[Kent Rawski]

good to feel loved and secure never let that candle go out for a golden glove boxer you can touch gently :)

[wordman]

thank you kent

[Falcon1]

Far fetched Ideas of love but beautiful Poetry Too!!!

[wordman]

thank you much

[Lea Sheryn]

Beautifully romantic! Your lovely poem carries a wonderful thought from beginning to end. I am captivated.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome

[jacob erin-cilberto]

quite the romantic write...in next to last stanza the "your" in the two lines should be "you're"
but alas...
to give oneself so completely to another...
that in itself is a dream come true.
j.

[wordman]

a bad habit of mine,but i repaired it,thanks for the visit jacob