candle in the wind

candle in the wind

A Poem by wordman


 



you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...


© 2018 wordman



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Reminds me of my first love. I still think about her everyday

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

yeah i guess we all walk down memory lane sometimes
When you (er, I ) read your romantically inclined poetry, all done very soft and gently, I am surprised to find this coming from your boxing/contracting/hard knocks background.
Perhaps this is your way of stepping back from some of your rougher experiences.
Whatever, I don't really relate to romantic poetry for whatever reason, but I recognize and appreciate the gentle romantic work you have done as obviously, have the gazillions that have read and review your efforts
Quite impressive

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you dave,we all have a soft side
Ah, the simplicity of love, in poetic form and the perfect image. Well captured and illustrated here, sir.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

i appreciate your visit
Ahhh true love like this and the music and pic

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

well,im glad you liked it julie
This is a sweet write and ever so lovely, so nicely written

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you kescha,i appreciate the review
Kesch

5 Months Ago

not a problem sir....
This lyrical love poem sounds like it might be put to music although I would alter the title so as not to provoke the ire of Sir Elton lol!
Welcome back Ron!!

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

he loves the glamour of it,,thanks john
good to feel loved and secure never let that candle go out for a golden glove boxer you can touch gently :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you kent
Far fetched Ideas of love but beautiful Poetry Too!!!

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thank you much
Beautifully romantic! Your lovely poem carries a wonderful thought from beginning to end. I am captivated.

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thank you for reading
Lea Sheryn

9 Months Ago

You're welcome
quite the romantic write...in next to last stanza the "your" in the two lines should be "you're"
but alas...
to give oneself so completely to another...
that in itself is a dream come true.
j.

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

a bad habit of mine,but i repaired it,thanks for the visit jacob

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