candle in the wind

candle in the wind

A Poem by wordman


 



you are my first star every night

you are my day

and you are my night

you are the love of my life

 

you are like a candle in the wind

the essence of you

helps guide me in

you are my lover,my best friend

 

i couldn't live without you

in my life

you're my day 

and you're my night

 

you are

the love of my life

you made my dreams come true

when you said i love you...


© 2018 wordman



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Aw ..such a love story!!! Dreams coming true...with a I love you! :-) Nice!

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you susan
I truly enjoyed this write! To feel love that burns hot and bright is the goal of most. Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you jess
oh when love burns this bright there is no parting. Truly beautiful sentiments in this lovely write.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for the visit ladysue
Ehh!!!! Sigh!! This words are very deep, I feel the love in each verse

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you,about time you came around,,lol
My first thought was the song, Candle In The Wind by Elton John.
I bet you keep a notebook, or your phone with you at all times to take notes for the poems your mind puts together. I am not a romance, but with age, they are starting to change my mind. This poem is very sweet. I very much enjoyed reading all of them so far.

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

they just come usually and i ad music
 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
How romantic can you get? A poetic commitment if I ever saw one! Well written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

thank you for the review
It's a perfect love poem. Easy to understand.

Thanks!

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Oh WOW!! This is just so very lovely, So beautiful

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

thank you,sorry for the late thank you my monitor went out
Unspoken poet

8 Months Ago

my server went down for a long time, so i understand.
That's about as good as it gets I believe, in poetry or life...finding that someone that completes us in a way we never thought possible and makes us the best us we could ever be. And not because of what they do but because of who they are. Beautiful sentiments here. I enjoyed.

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

thank you mr franklin,and i agree
I was drawn by the famous title of Elton John.Now,I understand that message of Elton John may be applied many ways.Very lovely write indeed.

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

thank you zainul

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