candle in the wind
A Poem by
wordman
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you are my first star every night
you are my day
and you are my night
you are the love of my life
you are like a candle in the wind
the essence of you
helps guide me in
you are my lover,my best friend
i couldn't live without you
in my life
you're my day
and you're my night
you are
the love of my life
you made my dreams come true
when you said i love you...
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Aw ..such a love story!!! Dreams coming true...with a I love you! :-) Nice!
Posted 1 Month Ago
1 Month Ago
thank you susan
I truly enjoyed this write! To feel love that burns hot and bright is the goal of most. Well done!
Posted 4 Months Ago
I truly enjoyed this write! To feel love that burns hot and bright is the goal of most. Well done!
1 Month Ago
thank you jess
oh when love burns this bright there is no parting. Truly beautiful sentiments in this lovely write.
Posted 4 Months Ago
oh when love burns this bright there is no parting. Truly beautiful sentiments in this lovely write.
4 Months Ago
thank you for the visit ladysue
Ehh!!!! Sigh!! This words are very deep, I feel the love in each verse
Posted 6 Months Ago
Ehh!!!! Sigh!! This words are very deep, I feel the love in each verse
6 Months Ago
thank you,about time you came around,,lol
My first thought was the song, Candle In The Wind by Elton John.
I bet you keep a notebook, or your phone with you at all times to take notes for the poems your mind puts together. I am not a romance, but with age, they are starting to change my mind. This poem is very sweet. I very much enjoyed reading all of them so far.
Posted 6 Months Ago
My first thought was the song, Candle In The Wind by Elton John.
I bet you keep a notebook, or your phone with you at all times to take notes for the poems your mind puts together. I am not a romance, but with age, they are starting to change my mind. This poem is very sweet. I very much enjoyed reading all of them so far.
6 Months Ago
they just come usually and i ad music
6 Months Ago
thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
How romantic can you get? A poetic commitment if I ever saw one! Well written.
Posted 8 Months Ago
How romantic can you get? A poetic commitment if I ever saw one! Well written.
8 Months Ago
thank you for the review
It's a perfect love poem. Easy to understand.
Thanks!
Posted 8 Months Ago
It's a perfect love poem. Easy to understand.
Thanks!
8 Months Ago
thank you for the visit
Oh WOW!! This is just so very lovely, So beautiful
Posted 9 Months Ago
Oh WOW!! This is just so very lovely, So beautiful
8 Months Ago
thank you,sorry for the late thank you my monitor went out
8 Months Ago
my server went down for a long time, so i understand.
That's about as good as it gets I believe, in poetry or life...finding that someone that completes us in a way we never thought possible and makes us the best us we could ever be. And not because of what they do but because of who they are. Beautiful sentiments here. I enjoyed.
Posted 10 Months Ago
That's about as good as it gets I believe, in poetry or life...finding that someone that completes us in a way we never thought possible and makes us the best us we could ever be. And not because of what they do but because of who they are. Beautiful sentiments here. I enjoyed.
10 Months Ago
thank you mr franklin,and i agree
I was drawn by the famous title of Elton John.Now,I understand that message of Elton John may be applied many ways.Very lovely write indeed.
Posted 10 Months Ago
I was drawn by the famous title of Elton John.Now,I understand that message of Elton John may be applied many ways.Very lovely write indeed.
10 Months Ago
thank you zainul
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Added on September 22, 2018
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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living,
i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares
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