Ultimate Poetess⁓✨ (a salute to all our wonderful Lady-Poets)

Quatrains in Iambic Hexameter, with an aabb, ccdd, etc; Rhyme Scheme.

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 U l t i m a t e Po e t e s s^✨

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Her ink vibrates in universal amplitude,

with such sure vibrant force pure ecstasies exude …

releasing with each graceful sweep of every stroke,

her words resound upon the page, as tho’ they'd spoke.

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Her flowing mane, as ebon as the Stygian night,

or golden as soft-textured braids, corn-silken bright.

I’ve seen her auburn waves, as hot as Hades’ fire;

or, lustrous brunette strands, that spark ardent desire.

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Oh, passion’s touch, awake unto life’s fervent dreams,

that evermore, desires and wantings merge as streams.

From every heartsong pours her sweet elixir’s voice,

eternal rapture ~ captured … aye, you'll have no choice.

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The shape she takes, it may be lithe or slightly slim …

might be, she’s strong or stout; perhaps, or fairly prim.

She’s every woman who has bravely shared her heart,

learned how to charm us with her wonders from the start.

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Each smitten bard in every land and realm worldwide,

has surely yearned to have her writing by his side …

impressive with her graceful wisdom’s keen surprise,

indulge him with the magic in her spark’ling eyes.

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If Free Verse, Sonnet, Villanelle, or lovely Prose,

it matters not what kind of poem she bestows;

for, when she blends her heart and soul into her ink,

it's hers you'll be ~ when she signs with a knowing wink*

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Richard W. Jenkins

©2019

Author's Note

Artwork, from Wikimedia Illustrations.

Please, feel free to offer whatever advice or comments you think will help! : )

Reviews

[Audrey M.]

This poem is so lovely it plays like a melody.
So tender and silky, it speaks to me.
How many hearts have you stolen or left throats swollen?
My dear man you are a rare gift with song,
Please don't keep me not waiting long
For another chance to hear your voice
Please understand I have no choice.
I'd love to dance to your tune
In the hour of midnights first June.
(Ok hardly is it advice to give or comment made. But I had to answer in this way, for to read your words is to dance in celebration to a man who celebrates women. Thank you for sharing

[Richard🖌]

With a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸

Sighhh! Such a compellingly stirring review you've gifted this doting poem and its graciously pleased author.
You certainly know how to catch a bard's attention, charming him with a delightfully sweet, warmly imaginative verse of your own.
Seems you celebrate men every bit as enjoyably as I do women.

For answering in the way you have, please, accept my warmest hug of thanks to thee, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Starbaby]

I admire those who can and do write within the confines of a structured form. It's not something I have the discipline to attempt, but I admire those that can, especially when they do it with style, aplomb and skill, such as you have demonstrated here. On behalf of lady poets everywhere, thank you for this fine tribute.

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Sapphos, the timeless poetess of Lesbos -- 600 B.C.

He seems to me an equal of the gods—
whoever gets to sit across from you
and listen to the sound of your sweet speech
   so close to him,
to your beguiling laughter: O it makes my
panicked heart go fluttering in my chest,
for the moment I catch sight of you there’s no
   speech left in me,
but tongue gags—: all at once a faint
fever courses down beneath the skin,
eyes no longer capable of sight, a thrum-
   ming in the ears,
and sweat drips down my body, and the shakes
lay siege to me all over, and I’m greener
than grass, I’m just a little short of dying,
   I seem to me;
but all must be endured, since even a pauper . . .

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Anyone skillful enough to compose "After-glow" as enthrallingly stimulating as you have, has scant reason to admire others' artistic prowess over their own … just sayin'.

Thank you, SB, ever-so gratefully for sharing this lovely homage to You and all your amazing colleague Lady-Poets.

Hugs! ⁓ Richard🖌

[fallon]

What a beautiful compliment to the poetess, or perhaps all the poetess’ as one. The way it is written feels both ancient and new, as though you are writing to Sappho herself as well as all the poetess’ that came after her.
“Each smitten bard in every land and realm worldwide,
has surely yearned to have her writing by his side”…. I can’t explain why, but I absolutely loved these lines.
You are clearly very skilled at writing. This was such a pleasure to read. In fact I will probably be back at some future time to read it again when I need inspiration. So thank you for that.

Fallon

[Richard🖌]

Ah, Lady Fallon🍷

How thoughtfully wonderful, richly appealing, and encouraging your sentiments are. Not that anyone is like You, but it is those of your kindness, intellect, and depth who make me feel so deeply rewarded for writing and sharing.
The allure of your words grace an olde bard's heart, gifting the sincere sensation of appreciation for his humble efforts.
And, how truly correct you that this piece is paying homage to You … of all other of your faire 'n gloriously poetic gender; and, keen of you to recognize this, when others have found my intent to be ambiguous in that regard.
Then, it's thrilling to know you find this effort inspiring enough for a return visit, and that you "love"anything about my poetry is gratifying reward beyond any I could have expected.

Thank you ever-so warmly for your visit, expressions of appreciation and understanding, and always for, your inspiring compliments.

With blessings 'n warmest smiles! ⁓ Richard🖌

[fallon]

I am thrilled my words could make you feel rewarded in writing and sharing. That reward is great indeed! There is nothing quite like inspiring another soul with your words.

[Richard🖌]

Never....
More eloquently spoken, Dear Poetess 🙏

[ProphetsMother]

Oh this is wonderful what a woman this must be to write about. It flower naturally and felt comforting to read. I pretended like you were writing about me.. and I loved it. Good job.

[Richard🖌]

I've fallen so far behind,

After my teaching retirement, being offline for so long, and not commenting on reviews, I'm making a quick thank you with a very grateful acknowledgment to everyone for their wonderful input and feedback.

Big smiles 'n hugs to one and all! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Soyam]

It beautifully captures the essence of a talented and passionate writer. The imagery of her ink vibrating with vibrant force and her words resounding on the page is vivid and evocative. The descriptions of her flowing mane, reflecting different shades and intensities, add to the allure and mystery surrounding her. The poem celebrates the power of her voice and the impact she has on those who read her work. It portrays her as a muse for smitten bards worldwide, igniting inspiration and admiration. Overall, it is a tribute to the enchanting presence of a writer who leaves an indelible mark with her words.

Beautifully crafted...

[Richard🖌]

Soyam Dear 🌾

So beautifully endearing your words caress with graceful praise … how can a hopeful bard help but blush with warmest gratitude.
Don't you realize this poem is about You … you, and every other poetess?

You've left that same indelible mark with your words.
Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady Somya ⁓ Richard🖌

[Matthew Daalling]

The efforts you put into the artistry in your delivery are not underappreciated. I love it. It reads like a love letter. Something to make them gush over. Loved it my friend. Keep them coming.

Matt.

[Richard🖌]

Hi there, Matt 🍃

That was the full intent, and I'm glad you saw it in my efforts, and I'm so very pleased you love it.

Thank you most gratefully, Sir, for the honor of serving you! ⁓ Richard🖌

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dear Richard, aghast of behold. It sounds saddening,
the poem in itself is beautiful,
but you dull and defame women with autic language.
The review you called her broad,
Very questionable,
Brood,
-------1809 Black Plague December

[Richard🖌]

Greetings, New Writer, with a warm Springtime welcome to the Café 🌿

Thank you for selecting one of my pieces to read and review.
In reading your comments I noted a few issues you have I did not understand: (1) that you are "aghast of behold". (2) "autic language". (3) "The review you called her broad, Very questionable". Perhaps, you could elaborate a bit more on these issues, that I might better grasp where I used those words and what it is you're getting at, specifically.
Other than those, what a nice compliment that you think "the poem in itself is beautiful".
Is "Brood" your pen name?

Thanks again for dropping in … I'll soon be by your page for a visit! ⁓ Richard🖌

[1809 Black Plague December]

Hellos, dear Richard, it doesn't go against the poem, at all, the comments and reviews were mentioned in a saddening way to me; a dismay, because it is about a dear heart, and then the reviewers based it; understandably, men like to laugh, I will not explain dear, except that it makes me cry for your heart because women never understand the laughter of men, not in rejecting way but jolly way; difference is, ...

[Richard🖌]

It dawned on me you might be referring to my response to Audrey M's review where i said, "With a broad "Thank you" heart smile, Dear Audrey 🌸"
If this is whay you mean, you completely got it wrong … the "broad" word referred to the width of my smile from reading her lovely review.
I NEVER laugh AT women … maybe WITH women, but never at them. The entire poem is lauding and celebrating all women poets, not a defamatory word spoken about women, or a iota of intent.
Somehow, you got me and my poem all wrong.
Perhaps, you could reread this loving homage with new eyes.

I highly respect your honesty, but not your judgment of me toward all the honorable poetesses I know, respect, and adore.

[1809 Black Plague December]

Okay, Richard. I did say I loved it. Not in referance to the poem but the outrage of the critics,
I found it beautiful, and I love it, sufficiently said, and outstanding. I'm just critique. A critique is either positive or negative. Mine are not meant non well. I speak as it is. Not how it is wils't.

[Ken Simm.]

And such a tour de forse. Such a melody; such a genius piece of empathic beauty. I am in awe my friend at the whole concept.

[Richard🖌]

G'day, Dear Ken!

Seems You, Corey, and I are on the same page when it comes to the fairer poetry officionadoes amongst us … what would life be without our glorious poetesses!

May your colours 'n brushes forever conspire to dance in glorious visions upon the majickal canvas of life! ⁓ Richard

[Crowley]

A tribute of the highest regard. It is amazing to catch the nuance that we can in the words of these unbelievable poetesses. It is difficult to not come off like so much of a man when reviewing. Try as I might, I cannot ignore the flutter that comes when my soul is laid bare and I am forced to uncurl my toes. Great Piece!

[Richard🖌]

Greetings to thee, Syr Corey,

How wonderful that you agree and have joined-in with your own spirited mutual admiration of all those enthralling inspirations for so many of our most passionate poetic efforts.

Thanks for your blushworthy accolade, too!
We're sooo lucky, all us smitten bards! ⁓ Richard

[willweb]

Another beautifully rhymed piece about a woman who has captured your heart, this one with her poetry. I have met many who have touched me deeply with their words. May I ask who this is about?

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Will,

Reread the poem attentively, My Friend:
As to whom this poem is about, the site's introductory title proclaims:
"Ultimate Poetess⁓✨ (a salute to all our wonderful Lady-Poets)"
Also, one would think upon reading the poem, it is obviously not in homage to an individual.

Take your time and enjoy, Syr! ⁓ Richard🖌

[willweb]

My apologies, I did not digest the title. I will try to do better the next time.

[Richard🖌]

Hah!
You should read some of my snafus.
Ah, that we were all perfect, My Friend … LOL!

[Scott Kris]

I honestly think certain works of art are only found within the capacity of a person’s gender or their gender experiences at the least.
A fitting tribute. And an enjoyable read.

Thank you for sharing your gift here.

Scott.

[Richard🖌]

Salutations, Scott🌿

There's not much I enjoy more than a philosophical review for one of my humbly laid pieces; especially one that let's me know it's been read and understood in the way(s) I wish it to be … and, you've delivered it with truly elegant aplomb.

And, I could not agree more with you, Sir.
You are most welcome … I thank you sincerely, as-well! ⁓ Richard 🍂