Blue Autumn

Blue Autumn

A Poem by wordman
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Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .


Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back


reminisce

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky


Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

© 2018 wordman


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Nice feeling to this poem, with a sort of punch at the end; darkness of love, as is the sky. vivid descriptions of seasonal nature. Nice Write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit betty
Betty Hermelee

1 Month Ago

You are quite welcome!
Love how you portray nature intertwining it with your emotions left for us to interpret nice creative emotive flowing work

Posted 3 Months Ago


A very beautiful write, Ron:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thanks for the visit pryde
pain comes in many forms and this one is beautiful

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
RuseInex

5 Months Ago

you're welcome, an' thank you too
I really like the way this was written
An unfortunate ending but a very nicely written, easy to read, flowing piece
Dave B

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for the visit dave
A poignant feel to this one Ron - -- sad but so graciously written and thank you.

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thanks fay,appreciate the visit
such a heart tugging piece really, so nicely written and full of emotions....

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you again for the reviews
We are one with nature. The way a lover feels when his love falls apart is similar in some way or the other to an autumn night, dark and cold.

"not a star in sight"

Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us.

Never stop writing!
~Aysha.

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for the kind review
'Blue Autumn'
wordman,
You've given a gracious and calm transition between what was and what is. Life is like that I think. No guarantees. But the desire to find good somehow is seen in your writing. Inspiring and gracious!
Kathy

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

75 degrees here today,cloudy and windy
Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Nice...we are having cold and snow in a day.
 wordman

1 Year Ago

45 now,low 32 tonight 75 yesterday crazy weather
Crisp, flowing and sad, rhyming poem Ron!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thanks john,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Added on August 25, 2018
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