Blue Autumn

Blue Autumn

A Poem by wordman
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Autumn leaves,

a whisper of snow,

the warmth from the fire

as the red embers glow .


Night fall comes

in shades of gray and black

not a star shining

as the clouds push them back


reminisce

as the day goes by

our love reminds me

of the colors of the sky


Gray and black

not a star in sight

i knew our love was over

this very night ...

© 2018 wordman


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a smooth flowing
versed poem
of love.. ending on
a sad note
..nicely penned

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you fran marie
Tangibly reflected wordman...the emotions rendered with a soft serenade almost, lovely...

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
What a sad ending to your lovely poem. But that's the way of it often I suppose. Neither Poe's Annabelle Lee or Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet had a happy ending. I enjoyed the read.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for reading
Fabian G. Franklin

2 Months Ago

My pleasure.
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Liz
The use of nature to convey the emotion and feelings creates such a vivid clear image as though one is in the writer's shoes. Stars and romance always create a sparkle and the idea that there are none in sight hints that the ending is not as bright. Beautiful poem this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit liz
This poem makes me feel soothed and somber. Love the imagery and simplicity. Props to the word play of "Autumn leaves."

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit v/p
This is such a wonderful and beautiful write.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you ang-x
Ang-X

2 Months Ago

not a problem
Nice feeling to this poem, with a sort of punch at the end; darkness of love, as is the sky. vivid descriptions of seasonal nature. Nice Write.

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for the visit betty
Betty Hermelee

6 Months Ago

You are quite welcome!
Love how you portray nature intertwining it with your emotions left for us to interpret nice creative emotive flowing work

Posted 8 Months Ago


A very beautiful write, Ron:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thanks for the visit pryde
pain comes in many forms and this one is beautiful

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
RuseInex

10 Months Ago

you're welcome, an' thank you too

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