Moon Beams

Moon Beams

A Poem by wordman

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Catching moon beams,

walking on crystal air,

gliding over the ocean,

full of love,without a care.

 

Sliding on a rainbow,

jumping on to a star,

fire racing across the water,

as i drag moon beams on the way.

 

Moon beams glowing,

in her eyes,

as i watch,

my beautiful venus rise.

 

The smile on her face,

lights up the skies,

as she walks on my moon beams,

i get lost in her eyes...

© 2018 wordman


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And I still find myself releasing that deep, contented sigh before I even realize it. I literally look around to see who made that silly high school girl sighing sound! You never fail to bring out the romantic even in me. Thank you for the beauty of your living, romantic heart.

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you for the visit,good to see you
dear Wordman... I love your presentation...
I felt as tho I were sliding off a Rainbow and onto a Star... a Keeper for me. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

lol,and i caught you,,thanks
Ah, beautiful...love is truly a decadent vision to absorb and explain and you have done so beautifully here :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you ruth
So VERY beautiful and full of sweetness. This is a lovely write here

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you again,i appreciate the reviews
Beautiful...your love reminds me of my fiancé's love, a man whom God sent to me when I left that selection job up to Him. He also writes songs and poems. I hope you really do have a special woman in your life!

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for the review
GardenDelights

7 Months Ago

yuppers....
I'm not a big fan of romantic poems, maybe that's why I haven't read you in a long while. The thing I like about this poem, however, is that your imagery is lively & fresh . . . "crystal air" . . . "drag moon beams" . . . looking closer, I see you use "moon beams" a few times close together. I know you're not picky about these things, as I am, but I would try to find a little bit different way to say it each time. All in all, a well-rounded romantic message! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Ohh, so nice, Ron:) You were meant to write songs. Fabulous:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thanks pryde,i wish i could
...This is such a wonderful and beautiful write. Enjoyed this write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

thank you for dropping by
Kesch

11 Months Ago

not a problem
Lovely. Moonbeams always call romance to mind.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

of course,thank you
Lea Sheryn

11 Months Ago

You're welcome, Wordman.
She's so lucky....... =))

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

lol,i doubt it,,thank you

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