Moon Beams

Moon Beams

A Poem by wordman

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Catching moon beams,

walking on crystal air,

gliding over the ocean,

full of love,without a care.

 

Sliding on a rainbow,

jumping on to a star,

fire racing across the water,

as i drag moon beams on the way.

 

Moon beams glowing,

in her eyes,

as i watch,

my beautiful venus rise.

 

The smile on her face,

lights up the skies,

as she walks on my moon beams,

i get lost in her eyes...

© 2018 wordman


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Beautiful...your love reminds me of my fiancé's love, a man whom God sent to me when I left that selection job up to Him. He also writes songs and poems. I hope you really do have a special woman in your life!

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the review
GardenDelights

1 Month Ago

yuppers....
I'm not a big fan of romantic poems, maybe that's why I haven't read you in a long while. The thing I like about this poem, however, is that your imagery is lively & fresh . . . "crystal air" . . . "drag moon beams" . . . looking closer, I see you use "moon beams" a few times close together. I know you're not picky about these things, as I am, but I would try to find a little bit different way to say it each time. All in all, a well-rounded romantic message! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Ohh, so nice, Ron:) You were meant to write songs. Fabulous:)

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thanks pryde,i wish i could
...This is such a wonderful and beautiful write. Enjoyed this write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for dropping by
Kesch

5 Months Ago

not a problem
Lovely. Moonbeams always call romance to mind.

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

of course,thank you
Lea Sheryn

5 Months Ago

You're welcome, Wordman.
She's so lucky....... =))

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

lol,i doubt it,,thank you
'moon Beams'
wordman,
There is so much thrill in the presence of moonlight.
It reaches down deep, thrills our souls with its light.
We fly with joy and leap so high.
It's love glow gives and gives.
We gain new sight
Bless you,
Mr Ron.
Kathy

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

you are to kind kathy,bless you
Kathy Van Kurin

9 Months Ago

I was thinking the same about you. Take care of yourself and have a nice evening.
 wordman

9 Months Ago

thank you,feel terrible tonight
As always Ron, so very romantic and expressive.

Posted 11 Months Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

thank you john
beautiful poem, dude,I hope you are now married,

Posted 11 Months Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

thank you,yes all my life
gram linski

11 Months Ago

What, you've been married, all your life, since you were an innocent child, discuss,
 wordman

11 Months Ago

no,since about 18,all my adult life
Beautiful word pictures in this one. Liked the way the images subtly moved from the skies to the eyes of the beloved.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for reading

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