Moon Beams

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Catching moon beams,

walking on crystal air,

gliding over the ocean,

full of love,without a care.

 

Sliding on a rainbow,

jumping on to a star,

fire racing across the water,

as i drag moon beams on the way.

 

Moon beams glowing,

in her eyes,

as i watch,

my beautiful venus rise.

 

The smile on her face,

lights up the skies,

as she walks on my moon beams,

i get lost in her eyes...

Reviews

[The dark Hydra]

I found my daddy and my mommy and my papa and they say go bother you.

[wordman]

why not ,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[The dark Hydra]

My daddy's name is david.

[wordman]

lol,that idiot aint got no d???,he cant have kids

[The dark Hydra]

I am begining to think I am adopted by different parents. But that's okay Mommy I still love you.

[wordman]

thank you baby

[wordman]

daddy will get you a pony

[The dark Hydra]

Please mommy please, I wanna pony, can you give me one

[wordman]

lol,can you ride that pony

[The dark Hydra]

I can try daddy. once the drugs in my system fade. lol

[wordman]

please don`t tell every one on thisetry site that i`m your daddy

[Giulia King]

I'm so happy I found this perfect piece. It's so light and lovely, thank you for sharing. :)

[wordman]

thank you for gracing my page

[Sami Khalil]

"The smile on her face,

lights up the skies,

as she walks on my moon beams,

i get lost in her eyes..."

[wordman]

thank you sami,i appreciate your visit

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome wordman////

[Sami Khalil]

"Moon beams glowing,

in her eyes,

as i watch,

my beautiful venus rise."

[Flowers of Eternity]

Such a wonderful and heartwarming poem!!!
I really adore it!!
I like the way you use your words!
Good job!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Jeff) I get lost in Mickys eyes untle she blinks then the ugliness of her face takes over

[The Immortal Phoenix]

(Micky) Laughing on the outside paining on the inside, still my face is beter then this guys face(we mean you word man)

[wordman]

thank you so much mr prick,i hope your poetry is better than your shallow reviews,,lol

[Chris Shaw]

Romantic love poem. Beautiful words, getting lost in another's eyes. Nicely expressed. Your posted artwork is lovely. Matches your words well.

Chris

[wordman]

thank you for the visit christine

[Chris Shaw]

you are welcome

[Falcon1]

Beautiful signs of Venus the stars moon beams and Love all the way a hit with romantics from all around not mistaking you got their hearts right from the start. Venus Moon beams and the Cosmos of Stars.

[wordman]

thank you falcon

[lightsong]

magical, Your opening took us to drift with You, Your words rang in my ears like "love is everywhere, love can do anything", gentle, dreamy and passionate. Thank You*

[wordman]

thank you for the visit