Wounded  Angel

Wounded Angel

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

  Wounded Angel


 My sad  friend.
Please smile for me.
Stay with me by the sea all night.


Your world has fell apart.
You don't know right from wrong.
Desperate acts had left you feeling
dirty and insulated from everyone.


Please take my hand.
Walk with a man who swims in s**t most
of his life.


Ain't no real Angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends.


We all must do things we are ashamed of.
World isn't clean anymore.
Not enough helping hands.


Ain't no pity for the people in plight today.
I know we get fatigue and humiliated to
believing we are worthless and destitute.


Broken Angel.
Please take my hand.
Walk with a contaminated man.
Jaded kisses and broken promises had
left me empty.
The not so sweet taste of life has turn me bitter.


The sad woman whisper.
"I'm a dumping ground for men
who want to use and abuse.
I don't mean much to no-one."


I  touch her face.
I tell her.
"We must ascend from the malingering hell.
Leave the one's who want you to beg for mercy."


"Ain't no easy road.
Sometime we must get up.
Tell the world to back away."


"Find a better path to be on.
Kinder  and better people."


Please my broken Angel walk with me.
Take my hand.
The new day is rising from the East.




           Coyote
            Oct1986



© 2010 Coyote Poetry



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Coyote Poetry
A old poem. I would appreciate any help. Never too old to learn.

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Coyote Poetry,
"Wounded Angel" speaks in the meaning of it's title. "Smile for me. Stay with me by the the sea all night" You give hope the first word. Oh, I like that.
Reality is complex in people many times and by the time many have left youth things can be quite broken; "Desperate acts has left you feeling dirty and insulated from everyone."
Then identifying with the lowness but also heights of understanding we can find in the eyes of others. "Broken Angel, please take my hand, walk with a contaminated man." So very beautiful in honesty, vulnerability; A place of healing in realistic thinking.
Then moving forward to more wholeness-healing; " I touch her face. I tell her. "We must ascend from the malingering hell. Leave the ones who want you to beg for mercy."
I found a mountain of meaning within this poem besides the lines i focused on.
Thanks for writing.
Bless you.
Kathy.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

Thank you Kathy. All of us need a kind voice and someone to listen to us.
Kathy Van Kurin

5 Months Ago

Yup! Why not? So much good comes in eye contact, listening ears and a kind heart. Amazing really. Bl.. read more



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There's so much truth pouring out of this. People can read this and get something out of it, learn something from it. Awesome job.


*God bless*

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is so touching, it really hit a soft spot for me... thank you so much for posting this. I think this poem is going to mean a lot to many people who read it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i'm sure the warmth of your heart brought great comfort

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dont know what improvement I can offer... it is perfect... I want to hold your hand
"Ain't no real Angels on this Earth.
Only us struggling to make amends."

and have this tattooed on my heart. God bless you for writing this... I think you were in my dream last night... I asked God to send me an angel to save my life... this morning i wake and read the above lines.... WOW! the message: we are all the same. Just keep loving, keep sharing. I love this and will lovingly place it upon my Wall-o-Fame! If only I could meet a man like this... angels would not exist and a true man would. Dreams. "Outside Dreams wait for those Brave enough to Live Them" ~a quote by Ark One!
Coyote, I will listen for your howl in my dreams and in those days I seek to be brave enough to capture one in my heart and in my hands.... I could go on but enough! Kiss, kiss and love 2~ always
~lovely

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is actually really good, something everyone can relate to in their own way

Posted 7 Years Ago



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