Coyote song

Just a effort at music

                                Coyote song

On a quiet nights.
When the sky is clear.
Lonely people wait for no-one.
They pray to the moon and they make a fool's wish.
To repeat the dance  with old lovers on empty beaches.
To rebirth dreams lost in the cold September breezes.

From a distance.
A lone Coyote.
He sings to the moon.
His song is for his missed companion.
Can be heard by the lonely souls.

The memories of first sweet kisses.
The splendor of making love till the morning light.
The kind and sweet moment of looking into eyes of lovers.
Leave a empty spot needing a tender touch of love.

The Coyote song is a sound to rebirth hope.
He still called for his companion.
He called to the moon to announce his hunger and desire.
To run free and together again with his companion.

Sometime the sea can heal great pain.
Sometime you need to sing to the moon for forgiveness.
Love can falter and leave us weak and alone.
Time is the healer.
New doors must be re-open.

The song of two Coyotes can be heard now.
The call of the night brought his companion back.
They dance and run into the night together.
They sit upon a hill.
Give thanks in song of the Coyote to the moon for the gift of a return.

A lonely man hear the song of the two Coyotes.
Made him smile.
He closes his eyes and remember his missed love.
He does a silence prayer to know happiness.
To be like the Coyote.
To be able to run free and find someone to celebrate life with.
He walk away with less burden and sadness from the sea.

              Coyote
              Nov2011

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Author's Note

Finally a new poem. I try to write a song. I missed the point completely.

Reviews

[Helena]

There is something about coyote's. They somehow seem to be just mystical creatures and you have written so eloquently on the song of the coyote. The subjects blend so beautifully together. Many descriptive stanzas fill this outstanding poem from beginning to end. Well done, loved it!.

[taylorrose]

i love it and beautiful photos i love how the poem reminds me of ur name good job hope to read more

[Renny]

Coyotes.... Brilliant even those birds feel what humans feel. Excellent piece!

[Eric Cox]

Excellent. Very good poetic pen, with emotion and imagery very good as well. Excellent poetic tale. Nicely done.

[Amber Elaine Marshall]

How true this is we all dwell on what we have lost and grieve about it alone...I like the symbolism you used by using a coyote howling alone nice job.

[Black Cat Fever]

I don't think you missed the point completely, I found this a most amazing write and good use of the coyote, tying it in with how I believe most living creatures on this earth feel. Few want to be lonely and all life wants to be free. The coyote could be any of us as well. Amazing work!

[CHRIS ANDES]

you're still a good writer...

[Wolf's Dark Song]

I love this. One amazing write. Love how you use the coyote in this. This is really brilliant work!

[Revolutionary]

I mean coyotes I just have a strong connection to the wolf.I quess I subconciously replaced the coyote with his winter cousin

[Revolutionary]

Beautifull vision of a lonely man being comforted by the wolves howling at the moon.I can see how it would make a man feel comfort in his solitude

[An owl on the moon]

In that dark moment of peace this song just echoes across the canyons and valleys... It is there, flowing through the coyotes, and in us as well... finding that freedom and boundless music of life gone wild with wonder. Intimate and intricate, my friend.