Kiss of A Crimson Poppy

Twirling in aromatic silken bliss............

Last night I sweetly dream't of fragrant flowers
In a changing kaleidoscope a whirl
Twirling as I yielded to their stunning presence
Thrilling as they gently swirled

I twirled and twirled inhaling the freshest heaven
I never knew could possibly exist
Lost inside an unforgettable aromatic world
My senses will never forget

A touch of satin rose petals brushed my cheek
As purple violets tickled my nose
Crimson poppies slipped though my fingers
Gently kissing the tips of my toes

I believe I found heaven in my dream last night
Twirling in an aromatic silken bliss
When I felt the touch on the tips of my toes
Of a crimson poppy's kiss

Author's Note

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Reviews

A beautiful dream to have ! It is very different from your other poetry but it is a very nice change ! It shows you can have a deep, well worded poem but also be carefree and simple; yet, no matter what you write, it comes off as elegant and lovely. Something as peaceful as flowers can make anyone feel uplifted and happy.

[STAR CHILD]

oh this is so beautiful and lovely Ma'am it held my interest the whole way
such wonderment and enchantment

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great poem alive with details of the beauty of flowers and you use all the senses to allow the reader to experience what you saw and felt. Stunningly beautiful

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow this smells of romance in the air with a hint of sensuality to tease the senses.

[rkm]

provoked beautiful pictures in my mind. well done!

[Forest Green]

Delightful walk through the aroma and visual ambiance of floral paradise. Nothing better, save a meadow of wildflowers. Excellent visuals in your poem, complete with the drift of sleep.

Daniel

[Carnivorous Poetry]

I love the detail that your dream portrays. One of the most important things that I look for in any type of writing I review is detail, detail, DETAIL! I could literally feel that all of our senses became one as I read on. Our touch, smell and sight were two people looking at the same painting. And reliving the same dream. Well done, dearest.

[Jibin]

That dream is so beautiful. You're not writing, you're drawing awesome pictures with the words, In which they were like taking the breath away. Aside from other writers, its a different feeling to read your works.
I'm totally agree with Carly Bre-Ann.
:)

[Crazo14]

i dont get it can someone explain it to me