You in Yourself

You in Yourself

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

You in yourself treasure your secrets...............


You in yourself,

treasure your secrets

inside a trance,

as your greatest work of art.

You lay them down  

as your reality

among the colorful leaves

then let them lie….

to your heart.


I simply wait

as your diamond

for you to turn the pages

of my body

while you sing.

I’m left dreaming of your smile

within a roaring tide

believing your time….

is everything.





© 2014 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Copyright @2014 - Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm

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Always beautiful writing Neva

Posted 1 Year Ago

seems we all want or need to be unraveled

Posted 5 Years Ago

Reminds me of me and how much I love my secrets, but sometimes secrets really need to be revealed, a great and beautiful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago

It is great as always, my poetic muse

Posted 5 Years Ago

You have a way with the loving poem.. you bring us right into your world...

Posted 6 Years Ago

Have not read your writing in some time, and I come back and it is still as wonderful as before. This was a great read, I love how your writing paints your emotions as you pour your heart. Truly amazing.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Loved it!!....Very well penned my lady. Thanks for sharing


Posted 7 Years Ago

i like it. its descriptive and very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Strong imagery, and the image at the top of the page defnitely added.
"I wait as your diamond" is a line i really liked - your usage of words was well.
Nice write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

This was very pretty. I really enjoyed it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on November 23, 2014
Last Updated on November 23, 2014


Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..


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