Spirit of A Thousand Winds

Spirit of A Thousand Winds

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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my fingertips trace one hundred places on your face.............

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I thought I had told you, I have never
loved someone like this,
or felt the touch of a spirit
 like a thousand winds
 wrap around my moments in this way.

 Look me in the eye and taste the passion
 of this wine that pours from my heart.
 You will then know the chemistry
that makes up the rhythm of truth
 in these words I speak to you.

 Listen to how much easier the rain falls
 because we hear calmer waters
when we sail on the river
of our sweetest emotions.    

I thought you knew how I dream
of drawing the curtains of love’s intoxication
 across our windows
and calling off our search for different skies.
 I was sure you understood
 how my fingertips trace one hundred places
 on your face that I love more each time
 I seek them out with my eyes.  

I thought I had told you,
I have never loved someone like this,
but perhaps I merely spoke these words in my mind.
 So I tell you now, I speak them aloud,
 to let there be no questions
 running in the meadow of everything we feel.
 I have never loved anyone
as I love you.  

Take my hand
and let’s draw the curtains
 of love’s intoxication across our windows.
  Let us shut out the world
 and sail on the river of our sweetest emotions.
 I will trace those places on your face
 that I adore with all I am.
 Come wrap me in your spirit
 of a thousand winds.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


Author's Note

Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
Artist - Ekaterina Zagustina (Katja Faith)

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The title alone caught my attention...
My so much to say about this, and all I can say is, I am in awe...such beauty pours from the soul...magnificent! Outstanding and going to my favs!!!
Poetry that takes your breath away...Neva that is your writing!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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My hats off to you for your romance and elegance.You are the queen of writers cafe or any other site.I am just a scribbler.
yours JVL

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tragically beautiful write poem ! love it neva!:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your words...it made me numb.This is such beautiful piece of work. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The title was amazing.
It's so beautiful. -might cry-
So wonderfully written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well, inhales fake cigarette... You had me at the title.. superb writing... who wouldn't love the "look me in the eye and taste the passion"... oh yes.. this one gets a yummy :) xxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I needed a Neva fix and this was a great poem for that. Thank you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Draw the curtains of love's intoxication across our windows"

This perfect line stands out to me for it's sheer beauty and imagery. If you had written nothing else, this alone would suffice. Added to my favourites.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was so beautiful. Keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great poem, that speaks of love so beautifully :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The title alone caught my attention...
My so much to say about this, and all I can say is, I am in awe...such beauty pours from the soul...magnificent! Outstanding and going to my favs!!!
Poetry that takes your breath away...Neva that is your writing!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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