While You Held My Heart

Last night you rocked me to sleep
while you held my heart.
You took your place,
looked upon my faded seas,
renewed my thirst for life.
Within all sounds sublime
and oh so sweet
your voice fills the eyes
of my night.
I am turned to take and take
each move of love
you lay
at my feet
never forgetting
a single line
in my hunger.

To hear you call me a creature
over-flowing
with soft sounds
makes me want to let them continue
gliding from my mouth
forevermore.
They tumble as ocean waves
of thought
from my heart and soul
becoming the stars of
heaven’s floor.

Author's Note

Artist * Arthur Braginsky

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I find it impressive how you can zoom in on the tiniest fraction of a second and paint a portrait with every detail of that moment. I love the way you make time stand still. Another one of your many talents. For me, it stood out the most.
This is touching work.

[EMF]

A moment captured in Amber. That's what you do. The moment waiting to be discovered. And the discovery is worth it

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really beautiful, lovely, and artistic and LOVE THE PICTURE!

[November Gold]

The way you write is a beautiful powerful thing. This was nothing short of awesome; your descriptions and flow was just perfect :)

[Jibey]

So nice to return and savour your smooth flowing words and romantic plesure...words that do indeed tumble from your soul...

[Audrey Howitt]

The hunger of love that we all feel! Such a lovely write, but makes me feel sad. I'm not sure why!

[Rene Velez]

nice images and words...as always exceptional.

[Poetic Beauty]

Those moments of pure bliss spent with a person who knows you inside and out. The one that gives you true comfort when life isn't perfect. This imagery is stunning and moves so slowly with delicacy and you can feel the love poured into each line. the comfort wrapped around each word.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A romantically pulse pounding poem with such a heart stopping ending...

They tumble as ocean waves
of thought
from my heart and soul
becoming the stars of
heaven’s floor.

beautifully brilliant.

[Joe Shetina]

This is absolutely gorgeous. I love how the art you choose always sets the tone for the piece.