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A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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As if I am bound to live life uncut yet emptied of all pain.

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A soft image satisfies the deepest sea
found in your eyes
recognized as comfort.
Harmony makes a new wind flow lovingly
into the arms
of old wounds suffered.  

Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul.

Scenes pass by of places with nowhere to go,
sailing as tributes tired of singing chords
without gain.
Still, I smile magically as if I am bound
to live life uncut
yet emptied of all pain.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm



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As a huge fan of your work Neva, you know I am above all honest in what I review,

"Measured out our shores bend
to meet in passion
to taste time’s recurrent goals.
Lighted I talk with my hands
to find balance
shimmering within my soul. "

This stanze screamed at me, it encompasses the mere taste of human companionship and the reluctance to let go of sexual and loving affairs, well done, great read!

Posted 6 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Loved the ending of it. The whole poem is nicely written. good job

Posted 4 Years Ago


I missed your poems! You bring such harmony to the words..they come alive with emotion..

Posted 5 Years Ago


"...to live life uncut / yet emptied of all pain." Neva, this is fabulous. It just doesn't get much more profound!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Still, I smile magically"...Amazing work. Love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this, really beautiful diction. For some reason, it created the image of walking along the shoreline, deep in thought. Not sure why, but it was very pretty, so, good job!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful beautiful, writing that puts the reader in the lock of a trance, something mystical, a hold.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

blissfully penned

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

first off the picture set the tone, and the words flowed effortlessly I have read you as read request through other poets, you are a soft delicate voice I enjoyed this...Hello Neva I am BABy

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What more do I need to say mmm?? Kewl as always

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As usual....a masterpiece
I want to say everything everyone else has said...I don't usually read other's remarks before I comment...can I say ditto....
Neva,You always paint such a beautiful picture with your words. I just enjoy the hell out of reading your work. It always seems to speak to me.
Wonderful write, Neva.................again.
allen

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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