Shattering the Mirror to Nowhere

Shattering the Mirror to Nowhere

A Poem by Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Walking the halls pressed against a smile that say’s I am sorry............

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The wind moves over understanding,
enjoying its time away
from tears,
feels whole again.
Sleep, I am sure, sets sail
with a stranger,
breaks the mold
enveloping your pillow,
takes away pain.

Colors give you a taste of brightness
that eternity goes through
when it blushes
at its own progress.
While forever struggles
with patience
and touches upon fruit,
thought of undressed.

Cold water comes near,
turns round and round
graciousness,
extending the waves
of grace’s touch.
Walking the halls
pressed against a smile
that says I am sorry,
no one notices
quite so much.

Long, long after our experiences
caress the light
we have given time,
they are unfolded,
carried away.
Insistence shatters
the mirror to nowhere,
sends winds of understanding,
my way.

© 2011 Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm


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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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This is such a touching peace of the heart. Somtimes it is beter just to "be" and feel your way and just embrace all aspects arround you, while you feel your own inner breath, and heartbeat, who always guide you.. I loved every word. Neva. I feel your native roots and visions within your poetry ;)

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another great poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I invisibly shatter my mirror often, i must say it pulls me in several directions. Great poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your style and voice are present in every write...unique indeed

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You pour your heart out in every poem I read of yours.
I'll just let this one stay with me a little longer... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ooohhh the last stanza speaks to me! Very nice read Neva, so pure and touching...
beautiful!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVED IT. Great JOB

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. Touching and heartfelt piece. Loved this. Beautifully written.


~anna rose

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The imagery is beautiful, and the poem is breath taking as well! I wanted to read on and savor each word.
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


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"Long, long after our experiences
caress the light
we have given time,
they are unfolded,
carried away. "

wow...this is very deep!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 22, 2011
Last Updated on November 23, 2011
Tags: touch, grace, sleep, tears, pain.wind

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Neva Flores Smith - Changefulstorm
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Hello, I am Neva, 4i, from Atlanta, Georgia. My latest book and videos: My latest book - Mailing Letters to the Moon rm_f1st('6','182','true','false','000000','av2j3.. more..

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