Vwls

A short poem, in which I throw away vowels. It's an experiment in how we perceive language.

Vwls

Chz Hmswrth

Vwls

lttrs tht fll n spc

wh nds thm?

nt m.

frm ths dy frth

hrby dclr myslf

ndpndnt frm

vwls

 

Author's Note

this should be obvious, but please ignore spelling mistakes. I did it on purpose.

Reviews

[VertoAtrum]

This was actually kind of fun to read. Like the tests floating around social media, it was hard at first, but then easy.
Fun, quirky, nice!

[C. Rose]

I was surprised that "from this day forth I hereby declare myself independent from vowels" was understandable.

[Tina Kline]

Very clever.
r mnds ill in wht s mssng!
Nicely done. I enjoyed.

[pianotm]

xcllnt. nd dn't wrry. I nly vr chck spllng whn askd.

[Argonaut1]

Vry cl. Gt ny mr xprmntl ptry?

[Avoiry]

Ha i love it, reminds me of a shell silverstein poem. Very clever and a reminder that everything has a place.

[s y e]

ths s prtty cl Chz. Rlly njyd t fr sr.

grt jb, dd.

hhhhhh

[Talia The Hedgehog]

i knw hw t d tht. prtty awsm hm?

[Average person]

Thats pretty cool how you can still understand it without the vowels.! cl bns! xD