Question of Faith

The question of whether existing is never left alone.
Some tremble through their thoughts. Others have no trouble of their own.
The peace that some harbor has become hard for me to find.
Sometimes I think I can manage, others I run and hide.
It's not always enough to know that you're still alive. Sometimes you need help, so pain becomes you're disguise.
They say that he can feel you. They say that he just knows.
I say he lets us feel this way so his love may be shown.
For what is faith without a test?
Much like a heart, but without a chest.
Faith is but a question other wise unknown.
Faith is but a question, but no man is great enough to be shown.

Author's Note

I wrote this one about 10 months ago. I was in a contest with my little brother and we had 10 minutes to come up with something and this is what came out. the family liked it so i decided to share it with the rest.

Reviews

[Broken Wings]

Beautifully penned piece. You describe faith well here. "The peace that some harbor has become hard for me to find" I like this line a lot because there are plenty in this world that seem to have found peace and it looks so good, but sometimes it can be a real challenge to find your own. I know I struggle with that a lot. The other line I like a lot is:

"For what is faith without a test?
Much like a heart, but without a chest."

This is very honest. No matter what faith people chose or are born into, there are many tests all along the way. I like to believe the tests are there to make you stronger, within yourself and faith. Thank you for sharing, I will be RR some of my friends to read this :)

[Chi Nichole]

well thank you very much