~Nothing is sacred...

The narrator is curious about the sexes...

There is this one girl…

And I can’t take my eyes off her.

 

She’s got these eyes which could pierce a heart and bleed it dry;

Hypnotic like the Afghan Girl from nineteen eighty-five,

I feel her eyes on me and instantly I need:

Replenishment, refreshment, to keep me alive.

 

I have only seen her twice…

The first time, she looked at me intimately;

I've never felt that way before...

This Saturday I will see her thrice.

 

Ashamed to say,

I soon forgot the feeling.

 

But I saw her again this Thursday;

Her eyes took me by surprise, so intense and piercing,

And the feelings came flooding back;

The way she looked at me…

 

In her presence, when it was my time to utter,

I could only stutter;

I hope they didn’t think me demented,

But if they knew what I felt for her,

They might consider me demented.

 

I must say that I did get distracted in Jazz,

Thinking about her – this time I hadn’t forgot,

She wasn't in the room, but her eyes haunted me…

She temporarily ties my heart in knots.

 

Today, Friday, when quizzed about others,

I kinda forgot and spoke without expression;

It’s almost as if the men mean nothing.

You have conquered my thoughts,

That’s my confession.

 

Intensity triumphs over everything:

A look, a glance;

A kiss…

Desire fuels my lust:

The fantasy where lips touch, eyes close,

And nothing is sacred…

 

"Baby I would let your darkness invade me;

You could maybe turn this white light into navy"

Reviews

[Dani California]

"She wasn't in the room, but her eyes haunted me�
She temporarily ties my heart in knots..."

I loved this.. intensely alluring...
such passion in this piece.. wow...

It really took me in. You take the reader
for a ride through the passion, the desire...

Beautifully penned!

[TamiViolet]

I'm totally taken in by this, for it's stunningly beautiful. I truly don't know where to begin but to say my heart races.... Ah, intensity, nothing like its power. My dear what a true work of art, beginning in the Guff...and without end... Grazie!
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[Angel's Lady]

What a wonderful write. Great job!
I can feel the intensity of the longing and I like this very much!

[Scott Eckert]

This is well written with a good flow.

[Jack Frost]

fantastic ;)

[Insanemom5]

this is very good and flows nicely

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

I really like the last bit best, it gives the story an open ending.

[Juliette Cross]

i like that this could have been written about any sex. its the same no matter what, a crush is a crush.
It's nice.

[Miss Kimberley]

"The fantasy where lips touch, eyes close,
And nothing is sacred�"

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Miss Kimberley]

"The fantasy where lips touch, eyes close,
And nothing is sacred�"

Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.