Press Rewind

Press Rewind

A Poem by CoconutSprinkles08
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A poem about changing the past...

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I would do anything to have
One little girl's eyes stay dry.
To bend the rules for one night.
To take away the tears she'll cry,
Take away her comfort in emptiness,
Make her realize she doesn't deserve this.
I wish I could press rewind,
One time,
Try to make it right.
Leave behind the rules I live by.
One night to change her life,
Make her eyes shine bright,
Show her someone cares
When she turns off the light.
Make it better for us
By doing what I must.
Save a little girl's soul
From future pains untold.
Save crippled hearts at war
Inside a small house
I've seen before.
I wish I could press rewind,
One time,
Try to make it right.
Leave behind the rules I live by.
One night to change her life,
Make her eyes shine bright,
Show her someone cares
When she turns off the light.

Take away useless fear,
Broken memories, so server,
And worthless fights
Leading up to that night.
Press Rewind,
One Time.
Give me the chance
To make my eyes stay dry.

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© 2011 CoconutSprinkles08


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loved it luv you peace out homedogs i crack myself up byeeeeeeeeeee

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful. You're beautifully broken in this art piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very beautiful. The way you write and the way you feel in this poem are both beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sweet, meaningful and well penned.
Great write my fellow NHite :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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