My Taken Hate

Oh my taken hate,

Riding soft on silver wings-

Forgive me chill perfection,

But oh how it stings.

Upon my shoulder settle now,

Sharper than any knife.

Swift and silent always be-

Slowly steal my life.

Silence quick my senses keen

Dileria so sweet.

Burn in fires of hellish love,

Ashes at my feet.

Never yet before you,

Never yet above.

Never yet you hear me,

Never see my love.

My heart beats softly now,

Hungrily devour.

My breath renders slowly now...

Kill me in this hour.

Author's Note

I wrote this based on how hard it is to be thousands of miles away from the one you love...

Reviews

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Very nice. I've had similar situations of knowing people without meeting them and wanting to be with them (wrote something about it myself), and I was definitely able to relate to this poem and those negative feelings of not being able to be with that person certain person.

[Mistaken]

I love this...the flow was amazing and the sumpathy you invoke with your description is amazing. Great work I love it Midget:)