you.

you.

A Poem by Courtney

It all looks so distorted. 
My face, my body, my soul.
I can't recognize my reflection, 
the mirror shows something else.
My body is bigger now, filled with emptiness. 
My hair is messier now, tangled with loneliness.
 My eyes are dark, sunken in with tiredness. 
I don't know who I am anymore, you took everything. 
When you stopped loving me, I stopped loving myself. 
There are no more trees, and there are no more flowers. 
There is just fire, and more fire. 


© 2017 Courtney



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Very intense write. The fire will ignite passion for self again one day... sometimes we have to travel through the dark for a while to learn.. Well done..x

Posted 4 Months Ago


Wow, beautiful, but painful. A very nice write up.

Posted 4 Months Ago


This is very beautiful. Sad, but beautiful, and very well written

Posted 4 Months Ago


Courtney

4 Months Ago

Thank you. Your writing is beautiful as well.
There is lot of levels of human emotions.Sad , aniexity . gentle words and honest reflections. Throbbing pain inside soul. Well write words are together in your creation.

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Courtney
Courtney

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