In My Dreams

In Dreams

Take my hand,
And I'll show you
The world within my head.

We can float
With the wind
As we fly hand in hand.

You can curl up in my arms
As we watch the sky of never fading stars.

Just you and I,
A lifetime in my dreams.

In a place where age doesn't matter,
A place where time stands still,

We can live there together,

Maybe we could run away...

I want to be with you forever.

Take my hand,
And I'll show you
The world within my head.

We can dance
Under the moonlight
As the breeze passes through my hair.

You could kiss me until the dawn
As I sing you a very lovely song.

Just you and I,
A lifetime in my dreams.

Just you and I,
Nothing more than a lifetime in my dreams..

Author's Note

For a certain friend of mine..

Reviews

[Valerie P.]

I trully loved it! I could even relate to it. That's what made it so special for me. Great job. That special someone should love it!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you very very much :)

[Rae :3]

An amazing poem that made me imagine a lovely place. Really well done! Keep it up.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much!

[A writer]

"We can float with the wind, as we fly hand in hand." this painted a beautiful picture on my mind :) The words in this are simply amazing. I love this poem. :) Thanks for mentioning me on your profile it means a lot :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! and you're always welcome ;)

[A writer]

:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

[wordman]

this is certainly a beautiful write,i can feel the love in your words

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much :)

[Echoes of Eros]

What a beautiful, loving dedication. Seems like the absolutely perfect dream for two, and sometimes dreams are all we have to deep us going for awhile. xo

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! That's very true :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Keep those dreams alive :)

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A journey through your dreams would be a fantastic one, I wager. This is honest writing at its best, CG. You pen such wonderful words... the last lines tell it all... 'nothing more than a lifetime in my dreams' - beautiful words, indeed.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I'm happy you liked it :)

[ANTO]

If the reader just rests a while - on this stanza -
"Take my hand,
And I'll show you
The world within my head. " and comtemplates it; the depth of it - that by simply taking the hand of a loved one and letting go of all thing's worldly - a form of telepathy can occur. To hold someone's hand with pure love in your heart, you can, I agree with teh author, know their all.

Your blossoming into a fine, fine writer CG, who writes from deep within the heart. This is your true voice, I feel.
Bravo dear poet !

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so very much! Your reviews are always encouraging :)

[Lizardo]

I really love this poem CG, Its really cool, Romantic, lovely (a great poem in other words)
I agree with luvs2write, the scenes revolving around this one are awesome.
Great poem Aless, another great job from you!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much!!!

[luvs2write]

I love the surreal feeling that this has...a really nice image. Especially as I'm listening to an Ingrid Michaelson love song. =) I really like this, it's a great write. I'm sure your friend will love it too! =)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you!!!

[closed]

Nice to see that your pen has been busy at work again
and what better topic


Dreams are 4ever^


-Dream