Contagious

Contagious

A Poem by Praveeta

Contagious

A pleasant sight it is
Eyes set on each other
Arms around each other
They twirl from one end to the other

Onlookers join in
Swaying with the rhythm
Mimicking the pioneers
In the quest for excellence

© 2013 Praveeta



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Onlookers join in
Swaying with the rhythm
Mimicking the pioneers
In the quest for excellence

you revealed an eternal truth :)
very good write :)
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Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and wonderful review. I appreciate it.
Anand Sehgal

3 Years Ago

my pleasure dear :)



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It is true that the audiences cant help and are drawn into such a pleasant visual. Nice work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and comment.
A simple and beautiful poem. I could really visualize what was going on. :]

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and review. I am glad you liked it.
I love the visual here. It would make a very good movie scene! Good work! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the lovely review.
Onlookers join in
Swaying with the rhythm
Mimicking the pioneers
In the quest for excellence

you revealed an eternal truth :)
very good write :)
************************************************************************************************************************************

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and wonderful review. I appreciate it.
Anand Sehgal

3 Years Ago

my pleasure dear :)
Looks like you just breathed the poem out being struck by a sudden emotional twitch. You can't say in a better way than this 'how contagious love is'.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and review.
It was very visual. You could hear the music and watch the dancing. You are very good at this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely review.
short and sweet i must say much explained in few words :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your feedback,Paras.
Nice echo with the title contagious, but I think the rhythm is a bit queer at times.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review.
imagwriteine

3 Years Ago

You're welcome
awww….okay, I'm not much with words, but I like this too. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your lovely comment.
Delicious reading ... Short and sweet ...
Ahena

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and review. I appreciate it.
Ahena MK

3 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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Added on December 28, 2013
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Praveeta
Praveeta

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