I Know What I Am

I Know What I Am

A Poem by CriticalxxAngel
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A poem of being able to stand up for yourself and having confidence

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You may not play with me,

For I am not your toy.

My heart is to be cared for,

Not for being destroyed.

You think you know everything about me,

From just a single glance,

but you are wrong,

You know nothing.

I know I am worth something.

Have reasons for being alive,

Im not your entertainment.

I am simply human.

 

You can't put me into a category,

For I am not an object,

I have feelings,

and a soul.

I should be able to live without judgement,

But of course that's not how things work with you,

You are incharge of everything and everyone.

But I am not a bug.

I can't be swated away.

I am a single mind.

 

You can't force me to do anything,

I have freedom and freewill,

I will say what I want when I want to,

I am not your slave,

Forced to do things because your the master.

I have no chains,

I will make my choices,

Act however I want because

I am myself.

 

© 2013 CriticalxxAngel


Author's Note

CriticalxxAngel
Is it too simple? Does it make sense?

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Not bad, but some of your word choice comes across as a little odd, and you've made a few little spelling errors here or there. I'd just go over the piece and make sure you're saying what you want to say how you want to say it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


CriticalxxAngel

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I will fix those errrors soon

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Added on March 2, 2013
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Tags: confidence, love, toy, friendship, friend, determined, sad