Nightmare Becoming Reality

        Lying in my room I can't sleep. The scars on my mind burn into my soul. My very being is crushed. I can remember what happened in my nightmare. It was a chilling winter night. The clouds covered the stars. Blocking their shine. A depressing scene to say the least. I was running down a street. A street that had no cars, and no people. An empty neighborhood. I felt alone and trapped. I couldn't leave the little town. I felt as if i was bound in wire. Wire that was dipped in blood coverd my entire body.

        I felt utterly insane. The blood burned my skin to the touch. I was on fire. Now running, I was terrified. I was losing my grip on my reality. Shutting my eyes extremly tight, maybe I could wake up. It did no good at all. Then I hear voices and they were coming closer. They were monsterous voices! I was panicking. They were coming to kill me. Well I wouldn't give up without a fight.

        I yelled for the monsters to go away. I couldn't see, a matter of fact, I was blind. I could not open my eyes. The burning sensation had taken over my body. I grabbed something on the ground and took it in arms. I swung with all my might to halt their approach. Then I felt liquid splatter on my body. It burned, and with that, my sanity disappeared. They were all going to pay for burning me. So I swung and killed them all.

       Now as I lay here in my room, all I can think about is that horrible nightmare. At least my room was soft and had tons of cushion. My nightmare will never reach me in here. I laugh at their foolish attempts to get me now and then. They still want to kill me, I see it in my never ending nightmare. I can't open my eyes still. My nightmare is coming to life. "Here you go physco, I am slipping it through the slot. It's a good thing they made sure your not around any pointy objects. I rather not get sliced in two." Yes!  The man in white is here with my food! He keeps the nightmare away! Laughing with enjoyment I devour my food.

       Laying back down in the cushion room. Well my room, I can constantly see the nightmare. Well at least people here understand me!

Reviews

[patricia]

Cant say I have ever had nightmares as bad as that, a good story Thankyou

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

I found this a gripping read my friend.

[Hayley]

This is a very nicely told story. It has the perfect amount of description and you built it right up to the climax. I especially liked, "and with that, my sanity disappeared." That is always scary... Very nice job overall.