Cristmas present wish (Original)

Cristmas present wish (Original)

A Poem by Wild Rose
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Christmas present wish (original)

25 November 2018

13:51

Dear Santa

I want

New game player: eBook: remote control car: pretty dress

Daddy pays no probs.

 

I would like

A new Jersey: Shoes: Ribbon for my hair

Daddy saves to pay for them

 

I Wish

A safe place to live: New second hand shoes that fit my feet:
A full meal to eat: medicine for my illness: bandages for my wounds

Some may be supplied by Aid groups

 

Wild Rose 2018


© 2018 Wild Rose


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Sadly so true Wild Rose, depending on which time zone and part of the world you live in. Reality stinks at times. Most people just think of themselves and how they are affected. But never looking just outside their own front door. What is actually happening in this vast world towards others?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

We see pictures on TV of the ruined towns - lines of people migrating (To somewhere safe - but wher.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I agree with you totally. Wild Rose.



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My heart will always be with those who have too little. Even as a lot part of the world's population celebrates the birth of Jesus, many wallow in their excesses and ignore his teachings. Very effective writing with a message all should take to heart.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cleverly laid, scene by scene. Heartstrings pulled, emotionally felt. For me this supercedes the want list because life isn't necessarily what one wants but what one's given.. and you've clearly stated that. So much going on in our wild and windswept world, tis hard to find generosity and geniality hand in hand anywhere - but then i've not walked the mountains recently.. who knows.

Would award you more than.. .. for your sincerity and humanity, Wild Rose.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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emmajoy

5 Years Ago

We're well into being a Planet of 'Haves' and 'Have nots'. Giant areas where Money means more than H.. read more
No point wishing for world peace, it aint happening.
Brexit never to be mentioned again.
Me not making a fool of myself at the Christmas party.
Let's be positive for2019.


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0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

Just an entry in a competition

Hope the Brexiteers get kicked out
Paul Bell

5 Years Ago

Hope it wins.
Sadly so true Wild Rose, depending on which time zone and part of the world you live in. Reality stinks at times. Most people just think of themselves and how they are affected. But never looking just outside their own front door. What is actually happening in this vast world towards others?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

We see pictures on TV of the ruined towns - lines of people migrating (To somewhere safe - but wher.. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

I agree with you totally. Wild Rose.

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Wild Rose

Lake Disrtict, Cumbria, United Kingdom



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