Tearless Rain

Tearless Rain

A Poem by Tasha
"

It's been a rainy day.

"

Dark skies,

Puffy clouds,

Cold breeze

Fills the air

Looking out

Faces appear

Rain falls

d

o

w

n

 

Slowly,

Quietly,

What looks to be

These faces crying

Sends chills

Shivering down my spine

 

 


© 2013 Tasha



Author's Note

 Tasha
Decided not to give up on writing. Thanks if you review.

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I'm so glad you decided not to give up on writing!! I struggled with the same thoughts many of times, and one time, I did give up, but I came back because I was miserable. Writing stories has always and will always be not only a way to relieve stress for a little bit, but also my passion. Long story short, You're a great writer!! don't give up on something you love to do because you are born with a natural gift!!
Oh, about the peom, it was great, as usual lol. Very nice imagery! GREAT job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I gave up for two months and I too was miserable. Thanks for the review.
Krystal Nicole

4 Years Ago

youre welcome
 Tasha

4 Years Ago

Thanks again.



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I love this. The faces crying part...I imagine it is the clouds , how they can make themselves look like anything

Posted 4 Years Ago


Crying and rain- a nice combination. I really enjoyed reading this. It had that 'raining effect' you know to it, the darkness and all. Great poem:-):-):-D.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

4 Years Ago

OuY HanT
this is really good, I love how you combined crying and raining.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

4 Years Ago

thank you very much.
what? did u want to give up on writing???

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

4 Years Ago

i'm still trying to decide...i think so. I'm not as good as I use to be
The shape you gave this poem is reminiscent of a falling water droplet which accents the surface point of the poem. It's nice to write about the simplicity of nature once in a while and how it is interwoven in our lives... at least I think that's what you were doing with this piece. Anyhow, wonderful composition.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I appreciate it.
I'm so glad you decided not to give up on writing!! I struggled with the same thoughts many of times, and one time, I did give up, but I came back because I was miserable. Writing stories has always and will always be not only a way to relieve stress for a little bit, but also my passion. Long story short, You're a great writer!! don't give up on something you love to do because you are born with a natural gift!!
Oh, about the peom, it was great, as usual lol. Very nice imagery! GREAT job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I gave up for two months and I too was miserable. Thanks for the review.
Krystal Nicole

4 Years Ago

youre welcome
 Tasha

4 Years Ago

Thanks again.
wow nice poem:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::;

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

4 Years Ago

Thank you.

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