Inevitable Loss

Passionate Love, no longer a friend -

Words of old �" “oh loving hate”- much truer than known.

Precious treasure twisted into sour poison, unknowingly swallowed.

Turn back the hand of time so I can return this hateful bliss.

 

Oh Time, what fickle fiend.

Fickle as the Seasons that always change

And never remain.

Not even for one who sinks into that endless Darkness;

 

The Darkness, it’s a toxic bog.

Oh, a hateful smog in the air

That swallows whatever the Light traces.

Never to return that which it so hatefully stole.

 

Yet, I shall never forget, nor regret

The inevitability of Life with which I was met.

Author's Note

I wrote this poem for an English Assignment, which I did pretty decently in
I hope you guys like it

Reviews

[Mustafa]

I adore the end of this poem,but it is short

[Danii*]

14 lines were more than enough for me XD but thank you, I'm glad you liked it

[Write Cat]

Great depth and sensation!! Life could bad and good at the same time!!

[Danii*]

Thanks so much!

[The earth (Titan maphah..]

Beautiful poem... I love the title too... I like it to the core

[Danii*]

Thanks so much! I'm very glad you liked it

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Powerful poem and poetically expressed. I never heard the word, fiend, it's friend without an "r", I thought it was a typo at first lol.

[Danii*]

Thank you so much for your review! ^-^ I am glad you thought it was a powerful poem :D
Actually fiend means like cruel or evil person haha

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're most welcome!
Yea, I looked it up. But that's what makes the whole fRiend without an "r" interesting... to me. Keep up the good work!