Speak To Me Like Rain

A short little ditty to excite your senses.

Speak to me like rain;
let your words travel from my head,
trickle down my body,
seep into my skin.

Your life becomes a part of me,
like the good earth and the wind.

Speak to me like rain;
drizzle in my mouth,
and cool my waiting tongue.
Tell me of,
the lightning yet to come.

Cool, soft and gentle,
yet solid as the wind,
waiting for that bliss . . .

Speak to me like rain;
and let me quench,
my aching thirst for your love.

Reviews

[~crazy Beautiful~]

wow this is very creative
i loved the visuals in this one, I watched it like a film.
I especially loved
"Speak to me like rain;
let your words travel from my head,
trickle down my body,
seep into my skin."
Nice work
thank you for entering my contest