You Fooled Me, Twice...

I basically just went through a pretty hard break up, if you can even call it that. So, this is basically just me letting it all out.

Fooled me once,

Shame on you.

Fooled me twice,

This is nothing new.

 

December, we met,

And you were amazing.

Then February came,

And things went a bit crazy.

 

I'd made a mistake,

A huge one at that.

But after days of talking,

You took me back.

 

Things were going strong,

I could be me, around you.

Then April, it was,

When you called me, and I knew...

 

Things had ended,

On your behalf.

Yet a few days later,

You're back. We laugh.

 

It was 5 days of silence,

Torture, and tears.

I was lost without you,

So far, yet so near.

 

We came to an agreement,

We'd have another go,

At me and you,

Just letting things flow.

 

You had me fooled,

For two whole months.

I thought things were working,

But turned out, you're a c**t.

 

You KNEW you had my heart,

Dangling over the edge.

But nonetheless, you cut the rope,

Left me hanging from a ledge.

 

What hurts the most, is how you don't care,

When I KNOW you cared so much.

But now, it's all over, you pretend I'm not there,

And I'd like to think as such.

 

The pain is killing me, I could drown in the tears,

If I'd only held tighter, you might still be here.

But it's over, you're gone, and sadly, we're through.

I'm glad that it happened, but GOD, I miss you...

 

Author's Note

This probably isn't one of my better pieces of work, but I just wrote this to let it all out, so, feel free to leave feedback anyways.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Missing someone sucks, but it does get better. I hate to know people are hurting
but you are one talented writer, keep up the good work.

[DarkRainbowPie]

Thank you so much! That means a lot, cheers :')

[Firefly]

The flow is good, your wording is well written, the despair that turns to anger gives the poem an arc, very well written :)

[DarkRainbowPie]

Thanks Cathal :)

[zainul]

Gone through the long piece.
Never bored.
You presented an account of story that sounds credible.
Never hid anything.
I am also happy that the relationship broke finally.
Never sustained such relationship.

[DarkRainbowPie]

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Haha, ah, I wish I could say the same about the relationship though.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend.

[Frieda P]

I read the title and had to read this one, been there, done that....it's a purging, rant piece of poetry and hit the spot, I do hate that 'c' word with a vengeance but you got your point across loud and clear!

[DarkRainbowPie]

Thanks very much, I'm glad the title got you. Haha, aw, I try not to swear in my poems, but the odd word is necessary at times. Thanks again!

[Frieda P]

I so agree, just hate that particular one, I usually will opt for an F bomb haha My pleasure :-)

[DarkRainbowPie]

I do prefer the ol' F bomb, myself, just wasn't sure if he even deserved to be called a 'f**k', haha x'D

[Frieda P]

Hahaha yes too kind I'm sure ;-P