A Bargain with God

What is life

but a bad dream if unlucky.

Or a sweet dream if blessed.

Tonight I lay myself to sleep

and I hope tomorrow the world ends.

My heart is filled with pain.

Filled with sorrow.

Too much melancholy inside of me

but I will be awake in the morning.

And a day after, and a day after.

All I care for is my soul.

And for a mortal life there is always hope.

Reviews

[sette]

the last line speaks for itself, there are endless hopes for a person to do despite the many pains that come along. Keep the faith and you will not lose the way.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Sette.

I appreciate the comment.

I am glad to see that the poem had a positive impact on you!

Happy Living!

[sette]

you too, yes I enjoyed reading the poem

[Desiree O'Neal]

Hmm I like it,although it's short.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Desiree.

I appreciate the comment but I would also appreciate if you explain why is it that you like the poem, please.

Happy Living!

[Desiree O'Neal]

I liked it because I felt connected, I could relate to it when it said "Too much melancholy inside of me but I will be awake in the morning.
And a day after, and a day after." life is a cycle and I do tend to get tiered of it a lot of the time. Nothing changes its the same routine everyday over and over. I felt as if I myself was getting sucked into your poem but it was short, with that being said it was still really good.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect Desiree.

I appreciate your informative comment!
I am glad to read that you could relate and enjoy the poem!

Happy Living!