everyday

everyday

A Poem by savannah estrada

every days the same 
her heart full but broken
bursting at the seems 
her feelings are mixed up
knowing that she dosent
know what she feels

somehow nothing mattered
but she still breaks trying to be perfect
all her effort just cuts her deep
screws her mind up
a tangled ball of string 

© 2016 savannah estrada


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Your writing is actually really good, you show a great maturity and depth in your poems. This is probably my favorite piece I have read from you and I really like it. "Her heart full but broken" I know that feeling well. This is really deep and truly real, I love it. Nice work with this poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


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savannah estrada

7 Years Ago

thank you so much



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Your writing is actually really good, you show a great maturity and depth in your poems. This is probably my favorite piece I have read from you and I really like it. "Her heart full but broken" I know that feeling well. This is really deep and truly real, I love it. Nice work with this poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

savannah estrada

7 Years Ago

thank you so much

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savannah estrada
savannah estrada

BRIGHTON, CO



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A Poem by savannah estrada