Early Bird

Early Bird

A Poem by Darryl Davis
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Originally I attempted to publish this on AP but the new site set up basically put it through a blender LOL!

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The crows have
.........................the guns

the pigeons have
.........................the numbers

the parrots have
.........................public opinion

and most of
.........................the birdseed

we scattered

© 2011 Darryl Davis


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And empty shells... what a mess to clean after!


Posted 12 Years Ago


we can't forget that we scattered most of that birdseed ; )

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your right about the Pigeons Darryl, wonder what they are like to eat! well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very cleverly crafted piece of writing! Very nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah I loved it..... I was trying to read this one on Ap before all the hell boke lose in Kevin's head. Guns does sound right for crows- those buggered birds can poop *grin* cheers, tuni from AP.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Darryl Davis
Darryl Davis

Brussels, Belgium



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A Poem by Darryl Davis