Darryl Davis

Darryl Davis

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http://flypaperpoetry.blogspot.com/
Brussels, Belgium
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About Me

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I'm an American poet in Belgium with a particular interest in fusing free verse with stunning, all-original images.

In addition to my poetry, please be sure to click on the "Photos" tab

I also have a collection of previous works at All Poetry which can ve viewed: http://allpoetry.com/poems/by/DarrylDavis

Thanks for taking a look and I hope to hear from you!

Cheers,

Darryl


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Posted 8 Years Ago


Thanks Darryl, there is no excuse for that second stanza on that starry night. I thank you for your prompt and frank input. As for mother, mother; that rhyme scheme or lack of it is an intentional "leaving" the last rhyme being sparse and oppositely positioned. I guess it did not work - that attempt the relay a sense if despondence and loss off rhythm in life. Will get back to you as soon as I've sorted a solution for the starry night and possibly an alternate rendering to mother, mother. Thanks again.

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Posted 8 Years Ago


thanks for your review :)