Something Present

idk stuff

I see people thinking they would die in the system white hairs all for nothing, I have an idea. I see people die run from bullets starvation a world of emotions on the other side I see a girl having the system on her shoulders it comes crumbling down her mind fades away the room goes dark as she puts the pill to her mouth saying a last prayer mamma I'm coming to you. So much pain, we don't know how to be but angry but together we can rise in this sea full of mediocrity you can be anything anything you want to be. It's time for a leap of faith once again.

Reviews

[Nyanachi]

This poem stands up on its own, its powerful and very well written. I like your ideas and how you choose to phrase them.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A clear and precise thought to be followed by many and a lesson one should teach, well done, good read.