Night Winds  ( Senryu )

Night Winds ( Senryu )

A Poem by Debbie_Philly


Night Winds

My eyes are heavy
The slumbering winds call me
Cozy is my bed

Deborah Kelly ( Debbie Philly)



© 2013 Debbie_Philly



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:) May you have many light and airy dreams. Simply beautiful

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lynn !! :)
It's pretty, it makes me think of soneone out on a warm nighr and they decide to take a nap out in the peaceful field.
Nicely done. ^^

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Bluefire :)
Bluefire

3 Years Ago

No problem. ^^
I really enjoy your pictorial accompaniments

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas...some sights don't allow it.. but sometimes I find them to go with the words and s.. read more
Thomas Skahill

3 Years Ago

it's working!
Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

I meant sites.... and thank you
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ANM
We all have a special place.. special words!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much ANM !!! :)
ANM

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
Slumbering winds, what an exquisite thought....now if only they'd blow this way! A sweet one Debbie. ;-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

LOL I hear ya Frieda most nights its only a thought for me as well...lol Thank you !!
the beauty of the night well narrated, many interpretations possible for the poem, well done
sayed, India

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Sayed !! :) Nice to meet you !
soft sounds of wind whispering to you at the end of day..lulling you to slumber..content and cozy in bed..beautifully done..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Sue... Happy to see you !! :)
Ladysue

3 Years Ago

my pleasure Debbie.. :)
Windy beds can be cozy. Really?

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

No... the slumber wind is calling me to my cozy bed... not a windy bed...lo, Thanks for reading :)
you spellbind all too easily

prodigious


-Dream

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

closed

3 Years Ago

okay, it's a deal then^
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Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Ok Send away :)
Suxh a peaceful insight of cozy bed, brilliant my friend

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie_Philly

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much Amos !!! :)

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Debbie_Philly

PHILADELPHIA, PA



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Hello everyone, My name is Debbie , I have been writing for about 13 years now, I'm 51 years old and live in Philly. I used to have a show on Blog talk Radio called REVERSE with Michael Quigg every o.. more..

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