I stopped fighting

What are you doing?

I am done 

I am beat

I stopped fighting

Why won't you?

You're just kicking a dead horse

More than that a long since dead horse

A carcass even

I've been done since you shown your true colors

Since I hadn't any power left

It's okay though one day maybe you'll see that

If you get bored maybe you'll go

Maybe you'll finally leave

Give up on me like I have myself

Reviews

[Warrior]

I see the sad tone of the poem does it well for the overall theme.

[Bloggergirl29]

I am glad you like it. I know it was one of my darker poems but I know some who have felt this was and I felt it should be put to words

[Warrior]

And you did well! ahahaha

[Bloggergirl29]

Thank you I was a bit anxious with my writings