Just a Little Girl (The House)

Just a Little Girl (The House)

A Chapter by sorry my friends....

Just a little house,

Just a little mom,

And just a little dad.

Just a little town,

Colored in pastel and red.

Just a little boy,

And just a little girl.

Who always felt alone in the world.

Just a little bored,

Just a little sad,

Just a little upset,

Just a little depressed.

Just a little gun,

Just a little rope,

Just a little girl who will never be be alone agian.

Just a little tug,

Just a little tie,

Just a little mommy hanging from the celing fan.

Just a little daddy,

Missing his eyes.

Her little brother fled,

Her older sister bled.

Just a little pill,
Just a little gun,

Just a little brothers head rolling,

Just a little sister coughing blood.

Just a little pill,

Just a little tub,

Just a little girl taking too much.

Just a little girl floating in blood,

Never agian will she be alone.

After all all it was, was,

Just a little House,

Just a little mom.....




© 2010 sorry my friends....



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YEZ! THAT! MORE OF THAT RIGHT THERE!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Twsited and well flowing.
Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


excellent write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good, I had a sense of watching scenes in my head, I would recommend writting poems with more imagery. I would recommend reading some of the classic poets they will change you're out look on poetry!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Wow... this is a pretty grim poem. I really like it n_n The repitition is awesome and it's got a really well-done rhythm. Great job! Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2010
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Tags: horror, slapstick, humor, dark, repition



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