enough room

Come on in,
Take a seat
Make yourself at home
Welcome to my heart
Where I reside alone
I hope you enjoy your visit
Sir, you musn't stay long
Because I am very busy
And I know that this is wrong
If I could keep you here, I would
I would love for you to stay
But I just haven't enough room
So I have to send you away
The attic is dusty and full
Of old albums and broken toys
The basement is unfinished
Not quite ready for boys
The spare room has been changed
Into my office these days
Where I spend most all my time
Where i read, where I write
I'd like you to revisit
Would you please come back soon?
Because sooner or later
I might have enough room

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i appreciate the generous invitation and will welcome the raincheck for that revisit for a longer stay, preferably forever! i freekin' love this write! i don't often get stoked by romance poetry, even though i write a hell of a lot of it, because it is almost always predictable...however, this is brilliant! can i make an early reservation?

[Annabelle Lee]

Why of course you can!

[Mazie Tackett]

lol that is cool the way ur like using like an invite to like a house to compare to ur hearts needs

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you.

[Annabelle Lee]

What a pleasant thing to open up to! 15 reviews since yestrday! I think that's the most I'v ever gotten on one piece! Thank you, guys!!!

[Dalia]

this is smart, I loved it really !
well- written

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you!!!!!

[KAOlmsted]

So clever. I loved this write. Just loved it.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you!!! I love hearing that. love it. love it. love it. haa it means im doing something right

[KAOlmsted]

You absolutely are. Keep up the hard work :-) Always my pleasure to read you.

[Joshua Lean]

I enjoyed this. Great poem.

[Annabelle Lee]

thank you!!!!

[Shadey Jadey]

Its very relatable. Great wright

[Annabelle Lee]

Thanks a bunch!

[Baby Ricochet]

Great poem Annabelle! Don't worry you'll have plenty of time for boys in collage

[Annabelle Lee]

Thanks, Ricochet!

[LA Lorena]

LOLOLOLOL! So glad to hear about the basement being unfinished! )Too many people don't make wise use of them, and just start using them for storing boxes and loose odds and ends. Basements end up being full of baggage, baggage that you don't need or want to start collecting at this time.) Much wiser to concentrate on filling those other rooms on the upper floors!

I enjoyed this Annabelle Lee. I always enjoy reading what you have to say, your thoughts and feelings and emotions. I see great things in your future, and you hold so much promise and potential, not just as a writer, but as a human being. Keep writing, and keep shining!

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you! I really hope youre right!

[Frieda P]

So much common sense packed into this write Annabelle Lee, always wise beyond your years, quite enjoyed this read!

[Annabelle Lee]

Thank you! I much enjoyed writing it.

[Be myself!]

I like this. Very true to some workaholics. Another very well written piece

[Annabelle Lee]

thnk you!

[Be myself!]

Your welcome!