The Fallen Blade Chapter 4

The End of my story, hope you all like it

“What…What happened here.” Cried Otis

“Our fortifying castles were not able to hold against the ogres.

“Are they still here?”

“No, Sir they all left as soon as they saw us coming over the hill. They plundered everything.”

“Well we must find them and destroy them and take everything back, is that clear?” Said Otis

“Yes, sir!”

Well, why are you just standing there!? GO!”

“Okay men lets go, show no mercy to the ogres at whatever cost, do you understand?” Asked Dregger

“Yes sir!” cried the men in unison.

The men hunted the ogres down for 3 months and they finally killed them all, coming back victorious they found the home that was once in rubble and covered in flames, was now buy a rich and lush countryside. The men arrived in the castle to hear singing and dancing in the streets. And if you still go their today you might just hear this exact thing

“Hey now you be the Ogbeast and I will be Prince Otis, King over everything in the world.”

“Aww, that’s not fair, we should be allowed to be Prince Otis too.”

And with the defeat of the Ogbeast, The Heroic Town of Mordu, has held out against the invaders of this land and probably for the Land to come.

“Hey, you! Come back here with my shield.”

“Why do you need it?”

“Because Prince Otis fought with it against the Ogbeast.”

“No he didn’t that’s your shield that you spilled tomato Juice all over.”

And so as you can see the men danced and laughed with each other as their lives went on for forever.

Author's Note

Please comment and give me your opinion

Reviews

[Ilerah]

just remember that after brackets it a comma, not a period, so instead
"What...What happened here," cried Otis
That would be the proper way, other than that, good.

[Zac]

Okay thanks for the review, I rushed a little too much to get this on the website and finished.