Pain

Pain,

Without pain where would we be.

We all have our ups and downs.

In our lives we have to make decisions through our pain.

Today, tomorrow.

What next,

We need to persevere,

 through all that brings us down. 

In our future we all expect pain.

It invades the heart, 

and tears at the body.

To defeat our only enemy.

We all want to feel wanted,

but many of us do not.

So, the next time you experience pain, 

Don't give up.

Keep fighting,

until the end.

Author's Note

Please review and give me your responses.

Reviews

[arqios]

So true, pain is like a thermometer, an early warning device that warns us when something is amiss. Thanks for sharing. :-)

[Moonlight]

This poem delivers powerful message. I love the last few lines a lot peronally because they just make you believe every word and make your conviction stronger. Great Work! :)

[Ilerah]

I like it, well written..

[Zac]

Thank you for being nice and reviewing.

[Riley Justine]

This is a really good poem and I'm only typing all this because it wouldn't let me just say "BEAUTIFUL" because that's not 25 chracters

[Zac]

Thanks,
I'm almost done the poem maturity.