Hello November

Hello November

A Poem by Graveyardfuck

Hello, November.
My sweet serenity.
Enrapture me in your brisk chill.
Your sweaters and hot cocoa. 
Your bright spirits,
Awaiting the month of December.
Gorgeous yellow sunsets,
Turning my eyes a golden brown.
Flecks of black, standing out like the extended nights.
Leaves turning brilliantly vibrant shades of red and orange and yellow.
Big boots,
Scuffing across the icy streets.
The smiles,
And laughter,
Shot up and all around,
As families are brought together.
New smells,
Beautiful places to explore.
The scream of a train speeding across the rails.
chugga-chugga-chugga!
Breathe in
The life
Of sweet November.
And say
Hello.~

© 2013 Graveyardfuck


Author's Note

Graveyardfuck
Inspired by the default pic.~

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"chugga-chugga-chugga" .. yes but that was before my time and yours I suspect. Nice how it reminded not of a train but of hot chocolate (or worse). Still, this is very colorful and personal and exudes a certain wonderful resplendent charm. I like it. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love this poem! It is so descriptive and beautiful. Autumn is my favorite time of year and my birthday is in November. I love how this poem made me feel and the images I saw from it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Love this! Explains every significance of November perfectly. Good job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like this one. It is so simply beautiful. The euphoria is very pure. When I read it I felt hopeful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"chugga-chugga-chugga" .. yes but that was before my time and yours I suspect. Nice how it reminded not of a train but of hot chocolate (or worse). Still, this is very colorful and personal and exudes a certain wonderful resplendent charm. I like it. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great job. i smiled while reading it

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love how you describe the months. I am indeed impressed with this

Posted 10 Years Ago


I loved this and how nicely written it is. I haven't been reading much poetry lately because of how boring some peoples poetry is. This right here remeinds me why I love poetry.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice one. You've done well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very nicely done and perfect for the time of year. Job well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


Adding in the "Chugga-chugga-chugga!" just brought the whole poem a different atmosphere.

It is wonderful how much can inspire a writer.

Wonderful words, you have in you poem, that bring great joy to me.

Please don't hesitate to send me a reading request.

I hope that you will continue writing.(:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Graveyardfuck

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review

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Added on November 3, 2013
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Tags: seasons, winter, november, cold, sun, thanksgiving

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Graveyardfuck
Graveyardfuck

Fort Walton Beach, FL



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