The Farewell

So this is my first time writing like this so bear with me

The Farewell 

 Silent as a still-frame, 

still fame rang with one last echo of a bang. 

 Capturing the heart of the fair maiden, 

fairly made in Anna Molly.

 Focused upon the flashpoint, 

flashed a pointed lead to sorrow. 

With a last tear, 

tearing the air she spoke.

Author's Note

So as I said in the description this is my first time writing like this. So tell me what you think?