my black tears

this is a tanka poem I am to write it in english...

My faith never ends

My black tears never leave my dying love inside

So it depends

Are there no black tears or are they hiding outside

They scare me to hold on, there for my words are dead

Reviews

[Craba]

Simply amazing in such a few short words. Awesome

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :)