Divine Union ~ Twin Flame

My blood replaces ink,
Heart replaces fingers
Ecstasy replaces tactile,
Ishtar replaces human
As we collide.
Honey replaces tears,
Redolence replaces breath
Souls replace shadows,
Reflection replaces soul
As we unite.
Passions replaces vision,
Rhythm replaces movements
Ardor replaces sense
when blaze replaces flesh,
You turn divine.

Reviews

[DJ]

This is very nicely penned, thank you for a good read my friend.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

I can feel the divine love here....

[junaid altaf]

the way u have composed this poem is completely a unique orientation .............
i wouldnt say that i can fully understand your perception but yes your basic concept of making the reader understand the fact that a human is inside and there only lives the supreme being...................
and divinity its only a matter of spiritual realisation............
bones and blood is not our only composition..................
and u have simply put infront a masterpiece to portray the reality.....................

[Keith LaFountaine]

Great imagery! Wonderfully written. Excellent job.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice imagery. I like the concept of the divine union.
Amazing!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[ms. barrie]

Mehak, This is a gorgeous poem, full of enlightenment and wonderful use of imagery...not to mention the pleasing fluidity you incorporated into this poem. 100/100

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I'm so glad you liked it. :) Thank you, Barrie.

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, Mehak :)

[KurKota]

Beautiful writing and imagery ! Makes a beautifully created mental and emotional picture...

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[Fatima Wani]

Completely mesmerized. Absolutely Amazing poem . :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thankyou. :)

[Fatima Wani]

Anytime. (:

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. The title, the poem , the wording , the imagery are all wonderful. Bravo...:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I'm glad you like it. :) Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

I love it...Unique...:)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Oh, thank you so much. :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^:)........