Arctic Moment

So cold.

To freeze time;
just the thought of doing so
can lead one to insanity.
To stop the clock's hands
cold in their tracks,
much colder than dry ice.
more frigid than
the blizzard
that imprisons your soul.

I would never want
to stop this moment.
The feelings I hold-
way too chilled.
My love for you-
completely iced over
who you are-
couldn't be any colder.
why would I want to
freeze this moment.
this time I waste with you.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. Thank you.

Reviews

[Kyle]

This is perhaps your best yet.....this one really flows.