‘Love Of You’

‘Love Of You’

A Poem by ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹
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Fear of finding love🌹

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‘The Love Of You’

The love out there
The love we share-

I know it’s out there
Out there somewhere-

Do you dare to take
A chance-
To entertain the
Dance-

You know your hearts
Desire-
It sets you on fire

What rules do you
Require-
To get yourself
To see
That’s what will
Set you
Free-

The love you want
Shared by
You and
Me-

The fear of having
Me near-
Scares the deepest
Part of your heart-

Tearing you apart
Keeping us distances
Between-
Is it some
Misunderstood
Dream-

Fear of losing
That one so dear-
Leaves only many
Unresolved tears-
All in the fears
Subtracting precious
Years-
Never to be redeemed
For what all did
Seem
To be some far distant
Dream-

Was the love of you
Trying to show through-
Connecting us to
The love of two
Hearts
That we’re struggling
To see -
That is meant to be
For you and for me-

Destiny

Not taking the
Chance
Welcoming that
Sensual dance-
Don’t let it go
Just take it slow-

Losing
Refusing
To take that chance -

Regret it will be -
If only you’d see
That some things are
Just meant to be-

Trusting your heart
Instead of being
Torn apart -
Is the chance
To be free
A love between
You and me -

Regret you will find
If you refuse to search
And find -
That soul
meant to be

Unending emotions
Unexplained devotion-

The love
That only you knew
From the start of
Time -

Joining the ‘o’
In you
To the ‘o’
Of love -
The complete
Circle of destiny -
Finding the love of
You -
Which lies within
The love
Of me.

Oh can’t you see

Don’t prevent your
Destiny
The coming together
of
the love of you
Inside
The love of
Me .

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
4 March 2018

© 2018 ‘Thoughts In Time’🌹



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A great emotional piece. Love is truly a journey sometimes it seems. Nice job!

Posted 6 Months Ago


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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

It is a journey that only those who seek shall find-Thankyou I appreciate your words🌹
John

6 Months Ago

Your welcome!
Yes, there are those who are afraid to let themselves go and give 100% emotionally to a loving relationship. Sensual yet innocent somehow. Nice rhyming. Lydi**

Posted 6 Months Ago


‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Months Ago

Many thanks I appreciate your time 🌹
Wow at the start i thought i was going to be moved by passion but for me it very quickly turned in to what i can only explain as a woman moaning at her man and trying to get what she wants for her own reasons i think

Posted 6 Months Ago


danny

6 Months Ago

That sounds good a loving moan from the abyss of your being bird like calling your sweat surrender <.. read more
&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

What a lovely description🌹
danny

6 Months Ago

well it's yours not mine
"Joining the O in you to the O of love the complete circle of destiny.". what a wonderful and a very original writing. Your "love of you" is absolutely lovely.

Posted 6 Months Ago


&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Thankyou so much I appreciate your kind words🌹
Kelly - you put forth such an elegant plea for the one you love to take
the chance. Despite the past, to give their heart so that one and one can
indeed become one. Somehow I'm reminded of the song from the musical
"South Pacific" it is "Some Enchanted Evening". If you're not familiar with it
I suggest you look it up. It beautifully expresses the sentiments you speak of.

Take care - Dave

Posted 6 Months Ago


&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

How kind of you and such wonderful words Thankyou I appreciate it will google it, you take care too.. read more
&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Yes I plea for that one whoever wherever to just give their love a chance- might miss out on the bes.. read more
I can relate to this in many ways, the most obvious being that being hurt in the past, always becomes a problem for the current someone, who has done nothing to deserve it....yet :)
The fear of being hurt again should never even be an issue, but it is, and one we have great difficulty in letting go.
I like the reminder throughout, that destiny awaits. And who are we to interfere in that? :)
Beautifully written. Personal, yet relatable to all.

Posted 6 Months Ago


&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for your kind words and understanding yes we as humans hold onto past hurts too long and de.. read more
Lorry

6 Months Ago

My pleasure :)
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mou
many chances were not taken..many words were unspoken..still love speaks all that are truly needed. you have burnt the readers with an ardent flame of emotion.
mou.

Posted 6 Months Ago


&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Thankyou for your time and kind words- we need to be true to ourselves and listen to the truth of ou.. read more
mou

6 Months Ago

just beautiful..and it's my pleasure :) :)
'Joining the ‘o’ ~ In you To the ‘o’ ~ Of love - The complete ~ Circle'

What a wonderful skill you have deep, deep inside you! Start to finish you express what so many feel.. The heart's a complex creature. essential and powerful in its task.. but needs such gentle handling when it comes to love, sweet love. A length of experience clothed in truer than true thinking.

Posted 6 Months Ago


&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Thankyou so much for your wonderful words- yes without searching you cannot find and true love needs.. read more
Such a great piece. The words you pick just hit the heart, and don't let go. This is a beautiful piece, and I hope everyone on this site reads it. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 6 Months Ago


&lsquo;Thoughts In Time&rsquo;&#127801;

6 Months Ago

Such kind words I really appreciate Thankyou 🌹

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‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

Essex, United Kingdom



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Writing poems of passing thoughts in time where time unwinds many thoughts and emotions all set for a certain place in time. more..

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